Excellent job!

Good Jack tell Patty what you think. Maybe it will make her listen more about missions and when to get people out.

Hi, I don't usually make requests but I have a lot of ideas but I'm not that good at writing them out. After watching this episode and various fictions I started thinking what if no one had gotten Macs message? Also El Noche was saying he had a lot of friends in the government and he wanted to know his new enemies. What if he got mac to tell him then got him to be his spy in the Phoenix foundation? I just think it's a cool idea and I'd love for someone to try it out pls.

This was AWESOME! I hope you've written more since this one and, if not, then i don't know what your waiting for! I loved this fic! I'll make sure to read your first one now!

Great story

I absolutely love this story! It will definitely be one that I will read again, and again, and again! You wrote the bromance and the hurt/comfort so well. Such a good read. Also, I love that Mac wanted to send the old timer in prison some inhalers because not being able to breathe sucks. So clever! A wonderful parallel and draw in to the episode. Great story:)

I absolutely love this fic. This will definitely be one that I re-read over, and over, and over again! You wrote the characters wonderfully. Such a good read. I'm all about hurt/comfort and bromance, which you write so well. Also, I loved that Mac wanted to send the old timer in prison some inhalers because not being able to breath sucked. So clever!

Omigod at last I found a story about this episode. I've been looking for a few days you thank you for writing what happened to Mac after Jack rescued him. I wanted to see Mac suffered a bit, and you gave me that!I love it!

:-) awww

Awwww! I loved how protective you wrote Jack! I hope you continue writting fix about them.

Love it. Very sweet. I love their little family, but Mac and Jack's bromance gives me life!

Love this story! I think Jack really is like a big brother to Mac, watching over him. You've captured that caring focus perfectly!

Thank you! I wanted (needed) a scene like that after everything in that episode. Awesome fic!

So happy to see another story from you! You've captured their voices perfectly and the depth of their relationship is keenly felt. Jack is Mac's protector and there's nothing worse than trying to do your job and not having the resources you need to get the job done. Jack's frustration is palpable in his conversation with Thornton...his guilt as well. Mac was hurt on his watch...it'll take some time for him to forgive himself. Thank you for sharing! Your writing captures everything I love about these guys!

I was so glad to see another fic by you. Thanks for another great story.