So this being from Killian's perspective made it work (although as with any story featuring BDSM elements I'd recommend a warning), but wow, while I enjoyed this piece for various reasons, gotta say the first half is a bit scary. I fully understand that it's a long term relationship of love and trust, and it's Emma who is bad at discussions especially about things like this... but... But I'm sorry, I've been in the community too long to not be concerned that someone will read this and get ideas... While the first half is hot as hell if that's what you're into (which I am), I actually had to "headcanon" that they've done this a bunch before... because even given the trust, Killian's POV, and the implied "safe word" when he says he'll let her know if it's too much... the scene itself is just so dangerous, partially because of the breathplay... It's a great story, but I'd be so much happier with just a few sentences on how they've played before, and know each other's hard limits, rules, and experience.

amazing! some editing still needs to be done, but you captured each character properly, right down to how they talk, completely in character I'd say.

Good piece. It was angsty, but you could tell how much Hook and Emma love each other.