Wow

Oh my god I love this! It's such a cute story so far, but I have to know what happens next! Keep my favorites safe until your next update, okay?

-Cammie (ITM)

Please update this and maybe have a chapter who Matteusz has panic attack cause he worried about Charlie

UPDATE!
PLEASE!

It's so good! Please continue!

I really, really like where this is going. I felt so sorry for Matteusz because he is trying so hard to make things right with Charlie but they're stuck at this impasse where they can't really move forward unless they can get to the bottom of Charlie's issues.

Isn't it a bit ironic that Charlie's claustrophobic and yet his whole race is confined in the Cabinet of Souls, which basically looks like a small-ish box on the outside? (Patrick Ness is a genius! haha). I can't wait to read more. :)

I like the potential of where this could go but I wish there was more detail in the description. I did wonder why he started to panic so much. This recent episode was brilliant. I did notice that there was a few grammar and sentence structure mistakes but those are easy enough to fix. If you would like a beta reader at all, I would be happy enough to help. Looking forward to the next chapter.