Sweet story

This is so adorable! I loved every second! DIPCIFICA FOREVER!

this is really good

now that's how you end a story that was great I loved it please keep up the good work

Very nice and cute. I think the recap at the beginning dragged on a bit, but liked the references to Journal 3. Pacifica and Dipper were both in character, and I absolutely love the flashback with Wendy. Spelling and grammar are mostly good, but you're inconsistent with your paragraph breaks. Generally, you start a new paragraph every time you switch speakers, so having both Pacifica and Dipper or Pacifica and Wendy talking in a single paragraph is confusing. The transition to the flashback was a little clunky as well; there are far more natural ways to do that than "maybe we should look back a couple of minutes..." But those were my only complaints. Like I said, the flashback with Wendy was great, as was Dipper's last line and the stinger with the McGuckets. If you do make a follow-up, I'd be interested in checking it out.

Well with Wendy's help (I'm shocked) Pacifica got to kiss Dipper YAY! Now the end the Northwest pictures eyes blood red & moving, means more trouble but fun. ;-)

This is way too cute. Oh man, if only this actually happened in the final episode. As a Dipcifica shipper I smiled too much when I saw that crossed out paragraph written in Journal 3. Well, the shipping is never shot down which gives there a chance to believe they can become a couple in the future.

Oh dear, that ending. Do you plan on writing a sequel, because I'm curious to see where that goes? In all this is a great story.

Pretty good. The $500 was a nice touch

This was amazing and I loved it so much! I think that moment between Dipper and Pacifica should've happened in canon. :D

Oooo future sequel

I take the last scene as set up for a sequel or possibly a prequel. The question becomes what the curse/haunting is.

Also the story was good, characters were consistent.

Also is this possible sequel going to be entirely Pacifica and the other towns folk characters, or will it somehow involve the Pines Twins and the older Pines Twins (Stan and Ford)?

Eh. Guess I'll have to maybe wait and see.

the way you ended hear, it sounds like it has potential to have a continuation to this fic that shows the 2nd summer in gravity falls. now THAT, would be something to see.