Reviews for Bloody Arc
KitCat0922 chapter 5 . 8/25
Holy shit I realized it now. The more Jaune uses his "semblace" the mor messed up everything is. It's like his insight messes up his vision and what HE THINK he is doing is different compared to the world outside.

It's like the effect you recieve from Ancient Ones in D&D where your oerpectuve is not truly yours and it messes up with the mind.

Mind you, this is a theory that based on the chapter.
TheDragon2000 chapter 19 . 8/2
Well this was definitely the best Bloodborne crossover I've read to date. (despite not being in the category) It was very interesting to read and I would love to see more. That said, Thanks for sharing!
TheDragon2000 chapter 12 . 8/1
I see what you did with the 'quoth the raven: Nevermore' it was a nice laugh.
thelich7245 chapter 3 . 6/30
There are actually 27 Caryll Runes with 6 of them being the Covenant Runes those being in alphabetical order: Beast Embrace, Corruption, Hunter, Impurity, Milkweed, and Radiance.
Warlord Fell chapter 19 . 6/26
Love this story, been following it for years, just too lazy to log in right now. Very sad to see that it appears abandoned...
XXxxxadisxxxXX chapter 1 . 2/14
Your way of doing time is interesting. I can understand it fine but I would still prefer just normal time as it doesn’t affect your story that much.
DarthMiner312 chapter 3 . 1/6
There is a error when Jaune said "quid pro quo".
The correct phrase in this case is "Do ut des" "I give to you and you give to me".
"Qui pro quo" it means "something instead of something else"
D.I.B 1.st chapter 19 . 1/2
Well done
DrackNath chapter 19 . 12/16/2019
UPDATE FFS!
IExistInAStateOfPureCaffeine chapter 19 . 9/4/2019
Hey yo... so uh... you got any updates we can whinge to you about getting? Or have you been busy? The latter is an understandable excuse for a lack of update... but if whinging does work I will happily whine like a little shit head of a child
Rider126 chapter 19 . 7/5/2019
update soon please, I want to see these filthy traitors and petty bastards get their due punishment.
Nonyaarb chapter 3 . 6/28/2019
loving it
Nonyaarb chapter 2 . 6/28/2019
awesome
Axccel chapter 12 . 5/3/2019
So, Jaune is a grimdark Ash Ketchum? Gotta kill ‘em all, Grimm-mon!
Axccel chapter 15 . 5/3/2019
I liked Jaune's presentation scene. You did a good job with that and I hope there will be more like it.

Ghira rules Menagerie like Ozpin rules Beacon...
...Sooooo, Ghira has absolute power over Menagerie. Like Ozpin has over Beacon.

The civilians won't fear the unknown Grimm if they believe that Grimm are known. So, Jaune's concern about it is pointless.

Nicholas Schnee? Last stop-gap? Seeing as we only know of Jacques Schnee (who married into the family, no less) is the one causing problems...Weiss is right, the White Fang bit the Schnee like rabid dogs. Heck, the guy they have a problem with isn't even a real Schnee.

Magazines, not clips. Clips are like what the M1 Garande used.
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