| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Lightning Lord |
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   forrogy2 chapter 51 . 7/28 is it possible for you to post your original ideas for story 2? it would be interesting to see where it would go(or you can pm me or smthn) otherwise, its a very good story but it really needs a part 2 to explain the lightning lord part and his interactions with other magical creatures |
| Fnaffan418 chapter 51 . 7/26 Unfortunately after reading the rewrite of this story I believe that this version is superior 8n the other version you skipped sections that were in this one |
| lord of the east chapter 51 . 7/14 This has been one of the most amazing fic! |
| Mischief101 chapter 9 . 7/9 I also hate the WBWL stories where his parents or even just his father abandon or neglect him. I don't read harem either. I like your story so far although Snape comes across as moronic. You'd think someone who successfully spied for both sides would be at least a little smarter. I do like the pairing of Harry/Daphne. Not much is really known about her so I have no preconceived ideas on how she should be. The one thing that I don't like is Harry's name. It bothers me when his name is Hadrian. Just like when authors change Tom Riddle to Thomas Riddle. His name was Tom. If it was Thomas who knows what his anagram would have been |
| PrinceFroze chapter 51 . 7/7 Ok so I’ve read this one and ur newer one ... I have to say I love both fanfics ... The Harry x Daphne very well done in development ur world building in each fanfic was amazing great job ... but I have to say the Lightning Lord is my favorite of the 2 I hold on to hope perhaps u would finish it... great work |
| leviOsanotleviosaaa chapter 51 . 7/4 loved it |
| Harrison Aldrich Emrys chapter 6 . 7/2 I don’t get why Harry lied about his name |
| Charlee56 chapter 50 . 6/26 BLOODY EXCELLENT! Masterfully done! Ok, the spelling's off in a lotta spots, but that's neither hete nor there. And now for part 2! |
| Guest chapter 18 . 6/23 YES YES YES! DICKASS UMBITCH IS GOING TO DIE! |
| Shadow's Delight235 chapter 51 . 6/23 This fanfiction is an awesome piece to read in my opinion, the pairing was a good change too, i wouldn’t change anything in it |
| Charlee56 chapter 13 . 6/23 "...a 'decedent' of... the Potters..."? A "decedent" is someone who has died. A "DESCENDANT" is a person such as a grandson or a great-grandson or any person in the line coming down in family from a common ancestor, someone with whom there is a blood affinity. You really NEED an editor. |
| Charlee56 chapter 10 . 6/22 This is a wonderful rewrite of the canon, but you are in serious (no pun intended!) need of a good editor. There are a host of wrong words as well as mispellinus on a fairly regular scale. |
| ddsurvivor chapter 12 . 6/21 Man this chapter was very deep. Had me, Realize I could become sad. very emotional chapter. |
| EmeraldGem92 chapter 51 . 6/20 This was a very well written book especially for a new writer! I greatly enjoyed reading this book and I'll likely read more of your fics later on! |
| Sujeeth chapter 50 . 6/18 Wonderful fanfic, truly amazing. I loved every aspect of it. Thanks for sharing sharing such a phenomenal story with us:) |
