Reviews for Unforgivable
Guest chapter 70 . 1/19
CAITLIN DIE NOOOOOOOO
lostinthearrowverse chapter 2 . 9/11/2019
You wrote The Flash characters very realistically. I liked that you showed that Caitlin suffers from multiple personality disorder and that "Killer Frost" and Caitlin Snow are different people.
lostinthearrowverse chapter 1 . 9/10/2019
Are Barry and Iris together at this point? Dating, engaged, or just best friends?
Guest chapter 50 . 1/31/2019
I was really expecting barry and Kara to get together so unfortunate that’s what kept me in the story
Guest chapter 70 . 8/23/2018
This is one of the most emotional and amazing things I have ever read. Are u sure that u r just an amateur writer coz this stuff is legit. You made me laugh and cry in this story especially iris death and barry's grief. But I still love this fanfiction
Guest chapter 6 . 4/13/2018
Man! I was hoping she didn't betray Oliver in this story
Guest chapter 5 . 4/13/2018
#CaptainColdLives
IceBlueRose chapter 5 . 3/25/2018
I just found this series - I found the Captain Canary part first but once I read the summary I decided to hold off and read this part first - and I literally just punched the air and went "Yes!" over Leonard's return. So glad you fixed that (Flashpoint would've been such a plausible way to do so, darn it, show writers) and I know I'm only a few chapters in but I'm enjoying the hell out of this already and I think you've done fantastic with characterization. (The Barry and Wally moment especially made me smile.) And now I'm going to get back to it!
TheLifeStruggleIsREAL chapter 68 . 3/7/2018
loved it, REALLY LOVED IT kinda want to know more about this Laurel. But I know that you discontinued this story so I won't ask you
Guest chapter 70 . 2/3/2018
Best thing. Making killer frost so smart. Unbelievable and awesome
A unknown person chapter 70 . 1/11/2018
I would have loved if Cait would be good as in the final episode of season three and first in season four. I don‘t like that she died because she is my favourite character. But your Story is still good.
Aragorn II Elessar chapter 70 . 10/7/2017
Okay so I have a bad habit of reviewing a story after reading it completely which is why I did not review any individual chapters. I will try to get rid of that habit. Now moving on to the review... The story was great. I loved the dark tone in it. Seeing Caitlin Snow's fall from grace and Barry's vain attempts to bring her back to the light made this story even darker. It was a nice Arrowverse crossover. I also liked how you brought back Laurel Lance as the Black Arrow. The deaths were all sad and effective-Patty,Carla,Harry,Iris and Mick. And I also loved your spins on various episodes. Some particular ones that I must mention-
The Flash 3x14 where you have Killer Frost reluctantly team up with Team Flash and kill Grodd.
The combination of The Flash 3x9 and 3x15.
The combination of Arrow 5x15 and 5x16,
The part where Star City is devastated by the Markov Device while plot points of Arrow 5x16 unfold.
Combining the scenes of Arrow 5x17 with Supergirl's torture,
Overall, pretty great and i loved how you involved awesome villains like Adrian,Slade and even Eobard even if just for a scene. This is just like a huge comic book crossover event where many characters come together to combat a threat and the storyline effects the entire universe.
Guest chapter 18 . 8/25/2017
BLACK MERCY! Duh
Guest chapter 42 . 7/12/2017
I frickin' live killer frost!
Guest chapter 42 . 6/28/2017
My god man, why couldn't you have killed Iris?
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