This.. was a great fic. Perfectly shows what trauma can do to relationship and how they can even grow from it. I'm not quite sure I like the quick ending but regardless, great characterization, story-telling, and just a great fic.

I can't even say how perfectly you described them, especially in the beginning! Yes, the characters got a little OOC later, but you portrayed PTSD really well and what Lucy felt after being left just broke my heart. Nicely done!

Sad and real and beautiful!

Wow this was beautiful. I cried quite a bit.

This is fucking beautiful. Thank you for this story, for this plot, and for delivering it in a manner that made people cry.

I really enjoyed your book. I can't even Express how it made me feel. Just pulled at my heart springs. I really feel the emotions. That is just love about books how they pull you in a wild ride on a crazy roller coaster. Makes so many emotions, the heartbreak, the happiness, relief, saddness, just pure agony, heart wrenching pain, and etc. It brings me such great joy to find books like this one. It helps me know that I am not some heartless person who enjoys peoples misery just for hell of it. That I know what pain feels like, the guilt of something bad. So I am so happy to have found this book.

Nicely done!

But, I feel like Erza would've cried over the death of a teamate then slapped him.

Oh my god this nearly made me cry. Stupid Natsu.
Anyway, absolutely loved this. The writing was spot on as well as the characterization. Great work!

Kinda got lost sometimes while reading the story but it was good. More of a teenagers in a bad breakup kind of feel for me but it was still good. P.S. I think Cana will be the next guild master but that is just my opinion.

I really liked the story, but I am kinda angry that Lucy didn't say what she needed to say. I understand that the readers might get agitated if they don't have a perfect ending, but after like 4 months, Lucy couldn't have just forgiven him without getting out all that pain she had went through. I just wish that she had at least expressed all that she went through to Natsu. But either way I still liked the story.

beautiful.
made me tear up.

Oh my goodness this was beautifully written, and the way you conveyed their emotions... crackerjacks, it was so raw and realistic, it was amazing. Oh the feels from Lucy and Natsu were real. I think you did a pretty good darn job on portraying the characters, I wouldn't worry too much on the OOC, considering it added more depth and elements to the story.
I like the idea of Mirajane being the next master... and since you mention it, it's true! XD Mirajane has been helping in running the guild, and she should be a candidate. Thank you for taking an extra step by looking at second degree burns just for this story, I just hope it hadn't mentally scarred you... considering your reaction from it.

Your writing is absolutely fantastic! Really looking forward to more of your work ;u;

This was amazing, you made everything so real and the characters were more in character than I've seen in a lot of other fanfics. I applaud you, this was amazing.