Reviews for The Mystery of the Frozen Heart |
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![]() ![]() ![]() A bittersweet ending. Thank God you gave Celestia and Alastair they happily ever after! It would have been to gut wrenching otherwise. A beautiful, captivating and complex story. I enjoyed it immensely. Your OCs are complex and multifaceted (if not likeable). The story line very clear and captivating. Thank you very much for it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohh….that was intense! And sad. I had to read the chapter a couple of times to get everything – it was fast paced and quite wonderful. I love Newt. You write him perfectly. What a wonderful and heartbreaking story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, that Leta is a self-righteous git! I love to hate her. The plot thickens! I sooo hope this will have a happy end. I love Alastair and Celestia. Tina is very in character –truly annoying. The whole relationship with Graves/Grindewald is downright hilarious. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohh...you are back! Wonderful! Very nice chapter. The scene between Newt and his brother was heavy. Great way to show a bit more about their relationship. I like the way you write Grindelwald; he is charming, smart...even nice. It makes sense. You don't follow someone without charisma. Still, we are still hanging at that cliff. The end is near (if I may be dramatic) and I am dying to see how you will resolve everything. Keep it up luv! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ending on a cliffhanger – you evil person! Thank God you update regularly… Great chapter. I liked the feeling of Albenheim; very mysterious. Tina is downright obnoxious. Therefore, she is very much in character – she got on my nerves on the movie too. Love it! |
![]() ![]() This is sooo good! A catching story! Update pretty please! |
![]() ![]() Cool as ice this Graves, very in character. Celestia is a real complex girl. Such a cool story - why don't you have more reviews? |
![]() ![]() Ooohh...Slytherin cunning at its best! This is going to get bad real fast. I love it! |
![]() ![]() So many originals and not one sue in sight! Great! Nice story! |
![]() ![]() Soo sweet! Love your Newt! Makes the whole Leta-thing even worse :( |
![]() ![]() This is promising – looking forward to see where it goes. |
![]() ![]() Cool! You start with a bang! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That woman has a one track mind and no mistake. Your Tina is spot on! Again, I have to say how much I love your pacing. It gives the story a unique dynamic – such a catching story. Please keep the updates coming! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your Graves is marvelous: he is cold, calculating, intelligent and quite funny. His interaction with Ethel was great. The connection between Leta and Nocturna makes me uneasy. I am definitely team Celestia in this one. Oohh…I SO hope for an happy ending! |
![]() ![]() ![]() O dear – that was quick! I really like your pacing. You start with a sweet and melancholic part about the lost daughter Artemis and bam! We are right back in the action! I never see that coming – keeps me on my toes. So glad you are updating faster now…what a wonderful story. |