Reviews for Alola to our Saviour
Guest chapter 60 . 7/7
What punishments were Trip and Paul given for their role in the betrayal?
Jigmario chapter 28 . 7/4
Greninja is a normally happy guy.
Mess with his friends, emotions and trainer?
He turns into a homicidal lunatic.
Jigmario chapter 35 . 7/3
Holy fuck is Guzma’s father a dick. I mean seriously.
ryannrice56 chapter 66 . 6/22
Don't give up til its over
ryannrice56 chapter 59 . 6/22
Why am I rereading the story again. BECAUSE IT'S SO GOOD Please give an update to the Story.
enderst chapter 70 . 6/20
hey pls update
ryannrice56 chapter 9 . 6/18
Hope you finish the story man.
RandoFox chapter 1 . 6/13
If there is going to ve only a little bit of swearing here and there, why is the story rated M?
CJLycan chapter 1 . 6/7
I hope you are doing fine, Spectre and hope for your come back. Not everyone can make a good Ash bertayal story and this here is the best in the genre. Others were the bland comeback of a badass strong trainer or some shit but your has a biting and interesting story. The plot for the betrayal was like anyother but I loved how you introduced the Ultrabeast and how he got away, and after chapter 1 I binge reading this for 3 days.

Plus, I like the pairing and it not being an amour pairing fic, the pokemon fanfic genre are flooding with these and its getting bland as well, but a rare and interesting pairing of Ash(games)Lillie and there are less or only yours is like this and that alone made it interesting.

The development after the Alola league acre got me interested on how you could possibly continue the story and thought that it would end there. But no, you got it biting interesting again as you included the URS and Dawn's condition to the mix and I especially got excited that you didn't throw the GladionxDawn under the carpet and an AU Red that's a murderous psycho with a plan and with a world tournament going about and the traitors participating made me more hyped for more.

I really hope you can finish this story, Spectre. This story is too good to be without a conclusion. Now don't you rush it, (I mean you not the story) take your time and hope for your return
Guest chapter 70 . 6/3
Hope you update again
ryannrice56 chapter 70 . 6/4
Finish the story
Guest chapter 18 . 5/27
... Dults why u critizizin we just got cussed thanks to u idiots who can't listen to a god fucking damn story without complaining not to u spectre but these ads holse
coolsteel chapter 5 . 5/26
hi again ur work is awesome srry for emailing at 5 in the morning
coolsteel chapter 4 . 5/26
whats grass ghost
Necrobscurity626 chapter 6 . 5/26
I was a little hesitant about the M rating but because of this chapter I like where this is going.
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