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I can't wait for the sequel! thank you~

This was such a sweet chapter! It's good know Viktor is trying to be responsible by wanting to take therapy. They have so many issues they still need to face and counseling might help. Also I'm looking forward to Yuri finally going back to skating. I know he'll agree in the end.
Yinyin was super adorable in this chapter and making a new friend. Saying they have a date with such innocence XD. Super cute. Looking forward to what happens next.

This was such a cute and happy way to end this story. I can't wait to see the progression of each character in the sequel!

Are they talking about mullerian duct syndrome? That disease that gives guys a fully functional female reproductive system.

jiji and ji-san, this two means the same thing (grandpa)
oba-san (grandma) and oji-san (grandpa)
it bothers me so much i had to point it out.. now on to the next chap

Absolutely love this! I look forward to reading more! :D it would be really awesome to have a sequel though

I vote that the sequel should be included with this one. Awww the wedding bells, can't wait for that. Wonder who'll be proposing first though. I hope we can get the other skaters to meet and interact with their son.

I think the sequel should be included with this story.

The shopping scene is so cute. I'm happy that Yuri is adjusting to having Viktor in his life. I just hope that they get the chance to get to know each other better and establish a strong, lasting relationship. And not just for them, but for their son as well.

I can't wait to read your next chapter!

I'll be fine with either. I would just love to read more of this story. Thank you so much for the update!

Great chapter! It was really cute! I think the sequel should be a complete story by it's self!

thanks for the update!

I really like this story, and I only discovered it recently! I'm surprised to hear that this first story will be ending soon, as I figured it would go on much longer before any sort of sequel happened! Still, I can't wait to see what might happen next!

I also suggest that you make the sequel a completely separate story from this one, otherwise it wouldn't really seem like a sequel in my opinion. But that's just me, lol.

Please update soon! :D

I'm calm. I finally managed to get to the part where Viktor decides what to do, and I'm glad you had him own up to it. He acknowledged his guilt completely and I'm glad you had him do that. Getting through the first half was hard because you only focused on those two things, but I'm glad I managed.

Okay, but Viktor keeps saying "I ruined his chances" and talking about being a bad father like those are the only two reasons he feels guilty. Like, wtf? You RAPED someone and you feel guilty about ruining their performance? You shouldn't even feel like a bad father because you DIDN'T KNOW ABOUT THE KID TO BEGIN WITH! WHAT YOU SHOULD HATE YOURSELF FOR IS THAT YOU RAPED SOMEONE YOU DICK!

Idk if you just didn't elaborate this enough or something, but you really make Viktor seem like an asshole because the last thing he's worrying about is that he raped Yuri. It's just very frustrating.

Anyway the story IS good, it's just that one point that irks me really bad. I hope you fix that later on in the story or, better yet, go back and edit in the guilt Viktor should logically feel for raping someone.

Now, what I like about the story is Yuri's characterization and his interactions with his son, who is a very adorable child btw. I also really adore Phitchit in this and, even though he's an utter prick for what he did, Viktor. Both of them are very well written (except where Viktor seems not to care about the rape) and the scenes with YinYin and the town's people are adorable.

I just really hope you round Viktor out as a character. You really just seem to use Yalenchka as an excuse to ignore some things about characters, which is fine, it's just that you use him to ignore the really really important parts.

Sorry, I realize that this is pretty much a flame comment, but I hope you understand why something like that may irritate someone and that I actually really like your story, it's just that one glaring thing that bothers me.