Reviews for Mind Games
blokrokker chapter 30 . 9/9
Don't you just love when canon fucks you over? Kind of like Service With A Smile by Couer Al'Aran, how Taurus was relatively chill and had all of his face, but then Adam had his face reveal and showed his psychosis. WHOOPS.

Accidental canon derail aside, I've been enjoying this story so far, even if I AM late to the party.
OGOPmeatb4lls chapter 11 . 8/14
Will you change sienna's gender seeing as she's cannonically a female.
GeraltRex chapter 1 . 7/21
I will admit that I was a bit pissed when I read Telepathy and it ended so suddenly. It wasn't until I looked up the Twisted Fate MK 2 that I found this Redux version/completion. can't wait to read the whole story
gogo bananas chapter 27 . 6/7
I reject neo, and substitute her with pyrrha.
gogo bananas chapter 4 . 6/6
I really dislike how naive you make jaune. for a guy that forged his way into beacon, hes pretty much a triangle mentally.
D72 chapter 9 . 6/2
Huh, I did forget the lecheries of drunky qrow.

I like that Jaune made a friend here.
D72 chapter 8 . 6/2
Once again, the pulse is alive in this one. I'd watch the shit out of this series.
D72 chapter 7 . 6/2
Not much of a chapter here.

Gotta say, this Fox lady sounds fanon as fuck. She sucks at weapons... so Qrow Branwen... Barely functional, nearly crippled alcoholic, who gives a shit about very little, and utterly DESPISES incompetence, decided to beat the failure out of her?

Bout the only way I buy it is if she is supposed to die. And He trained her wrong. Because it was funny.
D72 chapter 6 . 6/2
Damn, boy can't keep his skills quiet no matter how hard he tries.
D72 chapter 5 . 6/2
I dig the pulse of this fic, there are plenty of fics that are just good, but this one feels like a moving train.
D72 chapter 4 . 6/2
Like the fic, but the dueling banjo author notes are painful.
Sigma-del-Prisium chapter 6 . 5/26
Wait... Jaune was being watched by Ozpin that closely? And Ozpin just got more intel about Jaune's ability. No one should know about Amber in a pod.
Lord Matthew chapter 1 . 5/17
The sequel is called "Knight takes Kingpiece"
ankitmahat chapter 19 . 3/21
I don't really like Neo in this novel. But then again, she murdered a young woman in cold blood, knowing that she had a family and a little sister back home waiting for her.
But then again, I guess this is a realistic portrayal of a criminal sidekick like her so I guess I can't complain.
This story is quite well written but the more I read it the more depressed I get. So I'll be opting out.
Artekha chapter 48 . 10/22/2019
What’s the name of the sequel?
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