Reviews for Potter's Army
EmpressErena chapter 5 . 8/10
PLEASEEEE continue this, I would love to see how the women would handle this! as well u are an excellent author!
im1 chapter 5 . 7/18
do what's best for you, but I very much liked it and was looking forward to seeing how it played out
aradia1967 chapter 5 . 4/24/2019
please come back to and update this story I really like it
kingslayer98 chapter 5 . 3/3/2019
Hope u continue this in the future
superdude50989 chapter 4 . 12/3/2018
Looking forward to more chapters
Raymondjay41 chapter 5 . 10/9/2018
I’m sad you have stopped writing this as you are a fantastic story teller! Hopefully you find your desire and finish this one too!
Dennis Wayne Daugherty chapter 5 . 8/27/2018
Please update soon i love this story please updates
BROMBROS chapter 5 . 8/22/2018
sad
420raver chapter 5 . 8/22/2018
Can honestly say I am sad it's over. Funny enough it was your posting of your cancellation of the story that brought it to new enough status to catch my eye. Seen you was abandoning your story seen it was a sequel so I at least knew the first story would be completed so I figured I'd check it out. Turns out it was a really good story. Truly sad to think it's over. I wish I was a writer, I'd ask to adopt it. I can see a few places for the story to go from here but I'm more an idea man then a writer so I'd adopt it get my ideas down and either suck so bad at story telling or Grammer or spelling or something that I'd piss away a really good story. Sad to I can easily see them all heading back to Hogwarts with the evil toad thinking she's queen shit as dada teacher. First day maybe first week go the same. Dumb bitch says something about part humans or breading stock referring to the delicores and Harry snap's yelling at her before Gabriel and Hermione can get him out of the room. He gets detention. Maybe even postpone that screen first be calling Harry a lier and other things which increase that anger but with his ladies help he's keeping it together... Mostly. But when she makes that off handed comment about Gabby he goes off. Gets detention. Then during the detention she tries her blood Quill shit not knowing of the bond or it's extent. Nor does she know about the marriage contacts. So when the girls feel the pain Harry is in they confront him about it. With no chance at lieing to them he tells his girls who are at Hogwarts which is all of them but tonks. Daphne with her upbringing as well as his other two instantly know what it is and that it's illegal. They move quickly to remove her from the school and she is replaced at least for the rest of this year with tonks as the new teacher just to fill in till the end of the year. That way no curse befalls her. Then you can either ship toad face off to Azkaban or have her escape so there is another antagonist out there to deal with besides the dark lord. Then rest of the year can be used with a good year at Hogwarts while doing Dada club meetings. Maybe have sightings of either DE activity or have sightings of Umbridge. Maybe she wants revenge on the half breads and the Potter brat that caused her down fall. Maybe she can try to kidnap Gabby since it was the remarks to her that set off Harry or maybe Daphne seeing as she was the pure blood that not only knew how to get her arrested but maybe her dad gets Sirius name cleared while Umbridge is on the run so in her mind they where working with the fugitive black the whole time. Maybe when she takes which ever Daphne or Gabriel that makes Harry so mad when he tracks her down hiding in the forbidden Forrest it takes all his girls to stop harry From killing her out right. They don't want him to go dark or let his darkness consume him in doing this not only do they same harry but find out about the soul piece in his scare where the anger comes from. But as Harry lowers his wand the girls surround him in comfort and walk away... Better when Harry was fighting Umbridge to free his girl he gets the upper hand so Umbridge takes off with harry giving chase with intent to kill. Girls give chance to stop him. He catches up to Umbridge caught in a giant spide web he's just about to kill her when girls stop him same hart warming scene as before with girls stopping his anger in circling him and start to lead him back as Umbridge starts yelling at them to cut her down. Daphne turns back around and says just because we don't want our Harry to have your blood on his hands don't mean he needs to save Every Body either and all walk away to her cussing and calling them half breads and basically doing a good impression of the portrait in the hall at number 12. But all that noice gets the attention of the owner of that web she's in, last they hear of her just as they cross back into Hogwarts grownds is a scream that gets cut off.
Guest chapter 5 . 8/19/2018
.cry
k, sorry to see you go but thanks for what you've posted.
Dennis Wayne Daugherty chapter 5 . 8/20/2018
Please update soon i love this story
stevefocus chapter 5 . 8/19/2018
Thanks for letting us know.
Wolfwarrior20 chapter 4 . 5/16/2018
Hey good story could you update it
Wolfwarrior20 chapter 1 . 5/15/2018
Interesting story you should update it
Dragon Prime chapter 4 . 4/30/2018
I know good quote but are quoting Malcolm Hawke as a teaser for later or just cus it good line
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