Reviews for The true adventure of Finn |
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AlxkendBlader chapter 2 . 11/14/2019 Think you could put the Guardian Angel or maybe Fruit Witches in the harem, too? |
bleach1990 chapter 1 . 4/16/2017 yes make the water nymphs in the paring with finn they dont get the love they should |
NeroSyrix chapter 2 . 4/13/2017 pls continue this Story is great |
DJ Rodriguez chapter 2 . 3/13/2017 So far, so good! Keep it up! |
DJ Rodriguez chapter 1 . 3/13/2017 Now this story holds promise! Unique and original! I wonder on what is going to happen next! Keep it up! |
Shining Light50 chapter 1 . 2/22/2017 Actually, Ice king isn't even fat. he's actually very thin under that robe. |
The Book of Eli chapter 2 . 2/20/2017 I like the progress of the story so far and I'm interested to see where everything goes... |
LOOKATMEIMBATMAN chapter 2 . 2/21/2017 Does not feel rushed at all, cramming in boring content is horrible. |
Atomsk the Pirate King chapter 2 . 2/20/2017 Excellent chapter. Also hurrah for the water nymphs. The good thing is that BP and Samantha agreed to share Finn. He definitely deserves that mansion. Wonder what's next for Jungle Princess. |
Ryrttfcgj chapter 1 . 1/28/2017 Actually Iceking is really malnourished and skeletal. And wears a bandage diaper. |
FinalKingdomHearts chapter 1 . 1/11/2017 You need to proofread the chapters before posting them. |
Red the Pokemon Master chapter 1 . 1/6/2017 Please to the Harem add Huntress Wizard |
Atomsk the Pirate King chapter 1 . 12/21/2016 Awesome intro man! And the rings were a nice touch. I say add the water nymphs. Also if it's 7, can you add Marceline to the final? If not then maybe Huntress, Lizard Princess, Frozen Yogurt Princess, or Doctor Princess. |
daniel2610994 chapter 1 . 12/10/2016 Kinda new in this section of ff but so far so good for the cartoon category :v and this story seems pretty good specially because bp is preatty cute haha and the only recommendation that I have is that you should read the chapter after finishing it because some things didn't make much sense to me but apart from that slight confusion everything was awesome specially how sam got pretty damn jealous xD. |
The Book of Eli chapter 1 . 12/3/2016 I like how things are going so far everything seems fun and sexy. I'm interested to see more... |