this was absulutly shiut i wanted SEX i didnt get it i hate you pls die

Great story, i love the german dialogs and i understand its hard when you dont know the language. You are a great writer and i hope a new chapter drops soon
Ps: you should replace the german word "sie" with "du" (im german, and we use "sie" for superiors, but no blame i still love your try

Pleeeeeease add more to this! It’s so gooood!

More pls? Maybe? Hopefully?

PLEASE MORE SO GOOD!

Can we please have another chapter of this goodness?

Wonderful work! You have truly put some inspiration into my life for reading and writing again after years of dormancy. Who would have thought reading a fan fic of a fun video game would trigger a desire to write? Please keep up with the writing and progressing all your short stories so others may hopefully enjoy and feel the same inspirations! Also your storytelling really added meaningful depth and some flavorings for the GSG9 operators that Ubisoft really needs to add for all in Rainbow Six Siege.

Competition between operators? Oh neptune. I like.

Once again this is really an exelent story. I only wish the chapters were longer but that’s not some I can complain about. Keep it up!

Good writing I look foward for more. Uses alot of German

Very interesting, well written in my opinion. Uses alot of German

This is very well written. I rather enjoy so please do more. :)

Would absolutely love to see more chapters on this.

Never saw this story before the latest update, Great stuff. ;)

Please upload more! I am very interested! And with the new operators, you can present some new challenges. Maybe a bit of argument between shield operators.