you ruined it when you said you were twelve... ur twelve and the first chapter, you put breast and groins, and that stuff! your far to young for that..

'da faq'

in the process of showering, I was dying like I couldn't handle it XD legendary!

of all of RWBY Bumblby FanFiction, it was always Volume 1-2 or 4-6, but what you did was Volume 3, in the legitimate Fall of Beacon, I am impressed by what you did!

Beauty and Grace

THANK YOU FOR THE GLORIOUS BUMBLEBEES!

the story needs more dialogue

This chapter is everything I was hoping for in the show...Then Sun happened. T_T

Damn :')

I have mixed feelings about this. My heart is broken and happy at the same time and I am smiling and crying.
Keep up the good work btw.

I really don't like blacksun I feel that's how its going to go but they did a bad job with sun he means well but he comes on to strong and kind of creepy he stalked her for months that's not okay the main problem he comes of as the token boyfriend and he devolpment is crap they could have did a better job with sun

You just ripped out my heart. That was so beautifully sad and I love the conversation you made them had that could have happened but was ruined by Sun. Keep up the great writing. :D

Oh my gods that was sad and beautiful! GODS I WISH ROOSTER TEETH DID THIS! Fuck this makes me mad at Sun, Like, You stole this from us Sun! YOU STOLE THIS FROM US! Hopefully they will have this talk in the next episode. Great job! *yetihug*

I'm enjoying these stories immensely! Please keep writing the bees

I was kinda hoping there wouldn't be more drama after the kiss but oh well. Hopefully it doesn't last long.