I find escalot’s appearance strange and kinda pointless . Trunks at least tried to save the future. She on the other hand has like no reason.

Interesting theory . Well he had been able to heal the puppy . Wait though if he is like that now... does that mean he never gained the puppy?

Nice part about eighteen . The love of a mother.

Haha bulma’s Schemes . The secretary.

Haha bulma proving once again that she is the one who wears the pants in her house. Poor husband of hers probably have a Saiyan level ulcer by now .

Nice .

What powerup did they give Mr Satan? I assume you don't mean the stuff from Towa/Demigra...

Yep. How convenient of Cell to forget that he threatned to blow himsealf with the Earth if Gohan touches him. Nonethless great chapter. Have a nice day

Great chapter. Definatly enjoyed Dyspo origins. Have a nice day

Great chapter. But as a sugestion have Gohan point out how Cell can not be trusted because of his coward behavior in blowing himsealf up. Have a nice day

Cell traumatized Gohan when Cell transformed into a bomb and Goku had to save his life, which is why Gohan would not fully try to become as strong as he was during Cell Games. Make sure you incluse this reasoning of why Gohan does not trains serious anymore, because it makes sense. Have a nice day

In Gohan defense,it was Cell fault for not accepting his death with dignity and tries to blow the planet up, which is why Cell thankfully was not considered for the Tournament of Power and instead Freeza got chosen. In the end, Freeza was the right choice. Have a nice day

Great chapter. But there is a god of time, which is Chronoa,the Supreme Kai of Time. Also, Piccolo would make a so much better God of Destrucțion than Goku. Great chapter. Have a nice day

While this is undeniably an interesting and plausible idea, I really, really think the whole alternate timeline and alternate Saiyan children from the future thing could have been wiped entirely because it just seems very out of place and awkward.

Just love youre view of things.. Great Chapters.. Thanks

First off, this series. Pretty interesting overall, though Eschalot practically reminds me of U16 Bra from Dragon Ball Multiverse, who's personality I absolutely hate (along with U16 Vegito's), so I guess that carries over here as well. Still, curious as to what the true reason she was sent over here, because her universe should have no idea about the ToP and whatnot that is going on in this universe.

"2) The same person also asked me to consider elements of Xenoverse. Fine. But it hardly seems fair to me, to pretend GT doesn't exist and Xenoverse does. Why, because Xenoverse is better written, takes place alongside the DBZ timeline, and doesn't have as many glaring errors? Uh... okay, I admit those ARE very valid reasons."

You ignored the fact that Dragon Ball Online was actually written by Toriyama, and XenoVerse takes major elements from it. THAT is why I suggest that the Supreme Kai of Time could be seen as canon (she appears in both Dragon Ball Online and XenoVerse).

"So, I either have to ignore Xenoverse entirely due to one personal gripe, or pick and choose what I include from it. If I can do that for Xenoverse, I can certainly do it for GT."

I will wholly disagree with you on this. Toriyama literally had nothing to do with GT other than simply designing Super Saiyan 4. He even literally said that GT was a "grand side-story", but he was heavily involved in the story of Dragon Ball Online, which will likely not have any issues with the current canon (Dragon Ball Online has Mr. Buu coming in second at the 30th Martial Arts Tournament, whereas GT has Majuub coming in second at the same one). Also, the reason for you hating XenoVerse is very petty. Babadi with his spell was able to make normal humans into ridiculously OP fighters (by human standards). Why is it hard for you to believe that a Demon God, who is MUCH more powerful than Babadi, has a spell that could make him even stronger and use ki blasts?

"Because then you need a solid reason why Goku would use Blue against Krillin in Super, and not transform at all against teen Goten in DBZ."

I explained this to you in a PM which you have yet to reply to, so I will say it again:

You do realize that this only happened in the ToP recruitment saga, right? He didn't go Super Saiyan Blue right away against Frieza, during the U6 Tournament, Zeno Exhibition Match, or the ToP itself. The reason he did this (in the ToP recruitment saga) was to gauge his friends' reactions to godly energy (remember, they can no longer feel his ki, and feel an immense pressure from it) because he knew that they were going to fight similar fighters in the Tournament (after seeing how strong Toppo was). There is no reason for him to do this against Goten or Uub at the end of Z, especially when Goku is ridiculously powerful at that point.

"Super doesn't fit DBZ's end all that well currently."

...no, Super DOES fit with DBZ. Even Bulma said that Goku was the strongest person on Earth, which we initially had no reason to believe since Gohan was the strongest (and we wouldn't know that his power would wane). And it's not too hard to believe that Beerus and Whis wouldn't be bothered to arrive at the 28th WMAT.

Definitely an interesting story! Like how you really go into details such as the gods' failure with the whole Goku Black situation and whatnot. The ending with Goku kind of felt off, with all of his friends joining his family in his Hakaishin-world, but I guess he wouldn't want it any other way.

I get that you posted this story all the way back in December 2016, so some of these points might be...ahead of its time:

One thing I ask is please do not try to link this to GT (in its current form). Akira Toriyama called that series a "side-story", which means Super will likely never have any link to it, especially when Super already messed with GT canon twice (made the Pilaf trio younger and defused Kibito Kai). It's better to see it as an alternate timeline where Beerus simply never woke up. Also, for all we know, Toriyama might do a reboot of GT like he is doing a reboot of Broly (this definitely was unknown back in 2016).

Also, for the God of Time, Toriyama did come up with the idea of Chronoa, who is the Supreme Kai of Time, in Dragon Ball Online. Dragon Ball XenoVerse and Heroes adapted her into their story as well. I assume that this was the reason as to why all the Gods were smiling when Bulma mentioned it?

As for her being mentioned in any Dragon Ball show, it could be easily explained that she only protects the main timeline, and knew that everything was going to turn out alright for them no matter what. As for why she didn't help Future Trunks' timeline initially, as messed up as it is, maybe it's possible that she wanted a helper this whole time, so she saw Future Trunks and Mai eventually get placed into another timeline where they have doubles, and she plucked him out from there (maybe a new change would be Mai helping out as well).