I wish this was onscreen instead of what we got. Grrr show writers. Nice work.

Yet again another great episode excellently
..love the way you get all the links to past events eg Booth's feet and gloss over details as I'm sure he would being such an intensely private person

You packed a lot into this chapter, captured both characters well, and it flowed naturally. Nicely done.

I loved this. I’d love to see a continuation of this. Please?

I love the friendship between Booth and Cam, so before even beginning to read this chapter I was predisposed to appreciate it; you, however, have absolutely far exceeded my expectations! There are so many lovely moments here. I enjoyed the humor, the repartee, and even the grumpy waitress! It was interesting that even at this early stage, they each were insightful and observant. Thanks.

What an amazing story! I love that you've created such an intriguing collegiate back story for Booth and Cam while capturing their personalities spot on! I've got no idea how I seem to have missed this story before now, but I'm relishing the chance to rectify that oversight. You portray their shared ability to observe and surmise perfectly and the NY/Philly characteristics so well. Really enjoyed reading this.

this chapter was fun. I enjoyed this take on how Booth met Cam.

It was nice to see a Booth/Cam chapter. Now also know that Hank likes to crochet even before the nursing home. LOL

I loved Avalon, so was so glad to see her featured in this chapter! She is the anti-Booth and Brennan - all intuition.

I went back and re-read all the previous chapters, just because. And they hold up so very, very well. Little glimpses into the life of one Special Agent Seeley Booth and his family. This one was just perfect. Exactly what he needed, when he needed it by one who would "know." Lovely.

Good chapter. It seems Avalon has managed to cheer him some. I am really waiting for for the next chapter.

I love that! Avalon giving Booth hope.

Just what he needed. Hope. He was being crushed by lack of hope and Avalon knew how to get through to him. She's very brave.

an excellent chapter. I'm glad Avalon came along to give Booth some advice.

Loved the conclusion.