this was so good! you convey Zuko so well, and it usually annoys me when authors put in parenthesis all the time, but you use it so well and incorporate them beautifully, it makes me want more. thank you for writing this! have a lovely day!

There is such a thing as Capital letters.

Great story! The feels felt it

Dude. How dare you write such a beautiful story and make me feel my own feels.

this was amazing and made me tear up. i love the interaction between zuko and toph here.

shit bro. ah, that was good. it has a nice tone, you nailed the character voices. makes my heart ache

thanks

Wonderful, truly. You do Zuko, Iroh, and Azula such justice.

That was beautiful, punctuation errors aside. Was that due to you trying to keep the word count down?

I love how I didn't even read who wrote this before I read it, and then just like three lines in I'm like, 'yup, it's you'. You've got your own iconic style and it's just amazing. But oh, the zuko feels are back, and back with a vengeance.

I wasn't sure about reading this, but now I know I almost commit a mistake (and it was the mention of Toph and Iroh what changed my mind about ignoring this amazing fic). I agree, Toph is great character and deserves be written more often. I loved her participation in your story, the "extended version" of that scene in the theater is what I needed (? (Seriously, it make me soooo happy, thank you).

And Iroh... We don't deserve Iroh c'x He's just... incredible. (Yeah, Zuko you couldn't find the greatest father in Ozai, but you did have Iroh, that's way better).

And of course Zuko! You captured so well the way his mind works *-*

I had a lot of things to say about this fic, but English isn't my first language (excuse my very bad grammar or vocabulary xs), so...

Amazing job! Keep writting.

This was a great read. I enjoyed it.

I almost didn't give this piece a chance because I saw that it was entirely written in lower case - but since you wrote it, I read the first line, and then the second, and then the third, and so on.

So. I liked how started and ended the fic on a similar note - with Azula and the scars she gave Zuko. I also liked how you showed the nuances of Zuko's life and character via his scars - it's an interesting take on his experiences and the fire he had to go through.

Great job!