I love this series. I love your way of writing and how you add cliches without it being obnoxious or annoying. This is my favorite fanfic and the fact that it has romance makes it better. I started reading this when it had five chapters and would keep up to date with it since but wow, I didn't notice seven months went by. I actually got the most excited about a new chapter for any fanfic than I ever have. I hope you continue with your amazing work. (Blanc is my favorite CPU so I'm especially glad that she made an appearance) Sorry for the long post XP

Three things:

1a. Waiiiit a damn second... Green, yellow, and white clothing, blonde hair, blue eyes- Damnit it's Vert!
1b. The name is not helping Vert! Vii can sound like V or Vee ya know! And both of those is a part of "Vert"!

2. ...wat. HOW AND WHY IS NEPTUNE IN HDD?! If it is cause of the crystal, that explains how. But... WHY is she in it?!

3. Good story so far.

Nice please continue

Welcome back to the land of the living, a lot has happened since you took a break, but it's great to see this story back on track again. It's good to see Blanc and the twins finally make an appearance, it'll be interesting to see what goes on with them as well as what has happened to Histoire. As a suggestion for a future chapter, I think it wold be nice to see Hiroshi and Noire go on a date and some couple related stuff.

With that said I'm looking forward to see what happens next. Keep up the great work!

I like the story can you continue

You're going to continue the history?

Please continue I like it

Rem? Don't you mean Rom? Regardless, things seem to be heating up so I'm interested to see what happens next time.

Nice chapter! Even though it was a little sappy at the end, buuut it's good though. GJ mate!
P.s: Zergface, you are experiencing one of the most famous Asian specialities ever! It happens everyday bro!

Boy, the "real life syndrome" sure has nothing to do with Terraria or DFO. Lol. Anyways, good chapter, spelling is on point, but romance sap is sappy. Personal remarks aside, good job. -me from East Asia, via VPN, dodging Asian drivers and being hunted down by the CCP for accessing banned sites.

yey welcome back~ well Nep broke the 4th wall for your . . .coughlewdcoughstory. Well can't wait to see Nepgear debut~ XD

Welcome back from the dead, glad to have you back! I can say that this was worth the wait, glad to see Hiroshi and Noire getting to the next stage; I'm interested in seeing what will happen next. Oh, and I'm interested in seeing what you have next for the Collection of Lustful Wonders; I mean, all perverts would be. Also, I laughed when Neptune referenced that lemon-based fanfic.

Anyway, if you need help with anything you know where I am on the internet, have a good day and may the divines watch over you.

Great Chapter! I only began reading this a series a couple days ago, so there was no long wait for this chapter too, which was great.

The story overall is quite interesting, especially since most HDN fanfics I've read are OC going to Gamindustri rather than the other way around. The interactions between Noire and Hiroshi are also entertaining, though Noire's tsundere aspect feels a tiny bit forced to me, but that can be due to being in love I guess. Not that I'll ever know what being in love feels like, so it might just be me.

Keep up the great work!

I really like the story so far. I really enjoy the mystery element of your story

Ooooo, it's going to get more intense as this goes on? I'm interested in what's going to happen next, but I'll keep guessing for the moment. Keep up the great work and may the divines watch over you.