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very sweet story of a young family.

Love the "gourmet meal" Goku served. But of course it's Goku...keep writing!

Welcome back! Poor Chi-Chi! LOL!

i love them. And I love you for writing them. They are so awkward. They may be married but they are still technically teens so that awkwardness is to be expected. The interactions between Goku and Chichi throughout the four chapters are just really charming. You really captured the build to them beginning their journey as parents perfectly

Aw, that was cute. Now we have little Gohan :)

Goku could have flown over the tiles, but I guess he didn’t realize that X)
You’re really not holding back on the difficulties and on Goku’s naivete, and that’s awesome.
I can just imagine western bandit baghead Goku, haha
Sweet :D

"I feel like I'm gonna die every single time!" OMG HAHAHA
“Bulma was never the one to hide how much she spent on a gift.” Come to think of it, that’s so characteristic of Bulma. Also, she must be serioulsy entertaining herself, imagining Goku having a wife.
“...and the Bedroom Rodeo occurred.” whaaaaat this is how they do it? My gosh, the first time must have been a painstakingly embarrassing, step-by-step how-to.
Aaand here come Krillin and Yamcha. Please don’t tell me they walk in and ruin it.
“One day he'd prove his theory that his best friend wasn't a human.” Ooh right, it makes sense that Krillin would have thought this.
Lol kay XD

This is entertaining and so in character and just, sad, Goku and Chi chi, saaaad. I suppose this is what can happen to a girl’s ideas on love and marriage when she doesn’t have a mom to teach her :( Virtue is wonderful but this is just extreme.

Tay nmms i thought you stopped writting! Aaaaaaah!

I love love LOVE the chapie. Your way to wrote comedy/romance irs adorable. Adorable i tell you.
The paper bag part in the middle of the snow... cheezus i love it!

Thank you for stick around this fandom haha!

Lots love ~

VintageTaylor lives! Having been resurrected by the Super Dragon Balls in time for Broly!

And so, Goku and Chichi both find out that the other is nervous about the baby in their own way.

Will Chichi be able to reign Goku in to do more house work?
Will Goku be able to get more training in?
And, what will they name their baby!?

Find out, in the first episode of Dragon Ball Z!

I almost dropped my phone when I saw that this updated. It's been so long since you last updated that I almost gave up hope. I'm so glad though, the latest chapter was as light hearted and sweet as the rest. Really enjoying how much of a goofball you made Goku into!

This is adorable, my constant "aws" are for a reason! Goku is so sweet to Chi-Chi, perhaps a little forgetful but adorable nonetheless. Also just the entire "cute pink bundle" had me giggling. I absolutely love the fluff you've written, sort of sad it ends soon.

Update Soon!

I adored it, it was the kind of "smuttiness" that felt so innocent, almost like a first time kind of experience. Also bless Goku's heart and that entire "shirt bumpers" line. It sent me into a spiral of laughter. I love the entire reveal of Chi-Chi's pregnancy! It was adorable and had me smiling.

Oh man, okay. I have never read a G/CC story DESPITE loving them ?
So here I go.

I adored this, it made me go into fits of giggled just by how darn cute you made these two dummies feel by your writing. It's so clear they are OBLIVIOUS to marriage and yet somehow you made them sound so endearing.

I especially liked that tiny bit of them two at the very end, where they both were just being the biggest dorks on the swing set, I absolutely ADORED it.