I love how Tina tries to say she's fine, but still doesn't shut out the comfort. Queenie and Newt, though in different ways, both understand Tina so well. Beautiful story!

cool story

Now kiss kiss kiss!

I am dying of feels right now

Oh my God...the emotion! I love it! So well written as well! You're such a talented writer, please keep writing!

This is so sweet, I love all the characters, and I think you did a good job with them :)

I love this! I can only imagine the psychological effect that a lot of what they went through would have- especially that part- and you wrote it so well and so deeply.

Cute! Great prompt.

Good chapter, I like it very much! It'll be a third?

This was so sweet:)

I think this was perfect. The mind is a powerful thing. Trauma like nearly dying would most certain cause post-traumatic stress disorder at the least an anxiety disorder. Great job with realism. I wish the story was longer. This idea would be a great longterm story. Showing the recovery and the affects would be really cool.

I definitly think Tina and Newt would have some version of post traumatic stress disorder, as it is perfectly normal after a near-death experience, and what they both experienced in that cell would have been terrifying for them both.
I don't think they were too OOC, as there are often many different layers to people, and shared experiences do make strong bonds, so it makes sense that Newt would be the one to finally get throught to Tina, rather than Queenie, as he understood what she went through.

I really liked this ;) keep up the good work