I do feel like dust would be a little more powerful vs gunpowder, or Aura would at least keep a FEW of the bullets away. Then again from V6 you gotta channel the aura into your body and I could imagine the Sgt pulling the gun and shooting before Cardin could react.

I’m starting to wonder what would happen if a PREDATOR dropped into Remnant.

this has so much potential... to bad there is only 4 chapters..

This is good, can't wait for the next chapter

here's mine if you still need one

name: Emma Jennings

age:20

sex: born female, lives as a futa/herm/intersex, appears female on the outside

race: shapeshifting faunus

backstory: after a trip to a museum and seeing the bones of a velociraptor emma went to sleep and awoke to discover that her body had shifted to give her the senses and useful body parts of a raptor, after a brief panic during which she passed out and awoke to see her body back to its original state she realised she had limited shapeshifting powers and began to experiment discovering that she could switch between male and female and even be an intersexed.

personality: outgoing, flirty and seductive when talking to women but quiet and reserved when talking to men. lesbian. always on high alert and listening to her surroundings.

appearance: human from the thighs up with talon tipped fingers, from the thighs down powerful reverse jointed legs and wicked death talons gives her an edge in cqc and cqb, her aura gives her limited shapeshifting and her semblance is an empathic ability to copy/barrow others semblances. her eyes are a striking nearly glowing gold. many think she's a cannibal due to her not eating regular food and only eating some sort of dried meat far too pale to be beef and too pink to be pork. has 2 large caliber sidearms(desert eagle like, .50 cal) at hips, 2 smgs(mp7 style) on thighs, the "bang boom" 25mm anti-material rifler on her back and 2 "lightsabers"(a dust powered plasma blade that acts similarly to lightsabers but far weaker as they aren't powerful enough cut to through solid metal but will slice and dice organic matter just fine) hanging in front of the side arms.

callsign: raptor

profession: heavy weapons, cqc/cqb specialist, anti-material sniper, infiltrator.

I don't know if you accepting anymore oc but here you go

Name: Orion Von Jäger

Age: 19

Sex: Male

Race: Human-Faunus Hybrid

Appearance: Orion has silverish white hair with two midnight black and blood red wolf ears plus a tail. His eyes are both a midnight black plus his left eye is cybernetic. For his military uniform is a green and black camo armored vest that has his lucky number 50 underneath is a long sleeve padded black undershirt along with a gray scarf around his neck, gray and black armored padded pants and boots, and black combat glasses covering his eyes.

Personality: Orion is calm and collected under pressure using his wits and tactics to outsmart his enemies and help his teammates in danger he usually keeps quiet only speaking in whispers and hand gestures and also has a six sense for sensing danger or impending doom.

Backstory: Orion due to him being a hybrid has had a harsh life with his mother and father being killed by the white fang he had to live on his own in the wilderness out in the Badlands surviving from his encounters from bandits and grimm gain him a lot of experience in many areas for almost 10 years he live by himself until he was pick up by a Atlas Patrol who had been returning from a mission once General Ironwood hear about this young man he went to Orion and ask him he wanted to enlist in Deep Eyes after Orion join he was given cybernetic enhancements including a cybernetic eye to allow him upper and lower body strength, faster relaxes, increase spatial awareness, and better intelligences. The Cybernetic eye allows him to receive missions update, tactical overview, and the teams status.

Call Sign: Shadow Wolf

Profession: Heavy weapons specialist, CQC specialist, Medic, Scout, Radioman, and Tracker

Glad you're still alive man, for pairings i vote either winter or glynda, screw age difference

Always thought the rifle decals in ACM were shit. Magazine accelerator would also wear out parts much faster, such as the barrel (overheating).

Chris? A sergeant/ instructor must remain apart and somewhat distance themselves. They cannot be peers. Its how they accomplish their jobs. Its like a parent trying tone their kid's best friend, instead of a parent. Its the last thing anyone needs (does mostly harm). Noncom's do sit with rank and file in mess halls. The overpaying part... way over the top. Also, the MC should try and remain a bit low-key around any towns. He also shouldn't be throwing around money like that because it sends many bad messages for interpretation by anyone who sees it, or hears about it. Reputation, authority and respect are critical in most environments or places.

Cardin es un idiota.

Chris capturó a Neo.
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Cardin is an idiot.

Chris captured Neo.

you know what fuck it,
Connor grey
24
male
grey and black haired slim, but slightly beefy, moderate muscle mass
smart ass, and very outspoken
wanderer turned military
"scatter"
cqb

well its good to see you have not forgotten about this because I did. good update it leaves me wondering what is next.

as for an OC here is my submission

Name: Peridot Burken
Age: 19
Sex: Female
Race: Deep sea angler Faunus
Appeance: Complex read backstory
Personality: VERY FORTHGOING and considerit but envious of others.
Backstory: Due to the high infant mortality rates of marine faunus with the average 5% growing to adulthood. Peridot (given that name for her green lure) was expected to die in five hours due to her deep sea biology needing extreme water pressure to properly function but she made it. She wears a heavly reinforced antique bronze diving suit just to live which has it draw backs at weaing in at nearly 1000 pounds she becomes very envious of others when they do simple things like bending over and using a semblace as her suit wont allow her such libertys. The day she turned 18 she signed up for the atlas military and despite what she says the real reason she signed up is for the thrill of constantly beating death.
Call sign: Turtle (due to her speed)
Profession: Heavy CQC specialist using osmium (look it up its real) plated gloves designed to fit her hands and enhace her punches through shear wheight alone.

Ah~, what an entertaining fic this is. :v

Kinda hoping we have the two Queens (Alien Queen and Salem) meeting in some way in the future. Not sure if they'd actually get along, though. Salem would want to in order to further her own goals. But the Alien Queen...I think she'd want Salem gone so she could rule all. Plus, I doubt they'd be able to communicate properly. Eh, who knows?

While I'm open to the hint of Raven and Chris' mom either being the same person or related or connected in some way, I'm gonna have to disagree with what you had Ironwood think. The Maiden powers go to a young woman. Simple as that. Unless you plan to reveal that Chris is actually a girl who had a sex change...

Total mindfuck. 0_0

I doubt it, though.

As for pairings...if you mean in general, then Arkos and Black Sun for sure. No Iceberg, though. (reasons to be explained in a bit)

When it comes to Chris...if you're undecided for him, I can suggest a few girls: Weiss, Velvet, Coco, Neo, or Winter.

Weiss because...well, opposites attracting and all that. The gruff soldier and the prim and proper heiress. It would be adorable if you think about it.

Velvet because...well, for obvious reasons given in this chapter. Shining knight and all that.

Coco because she would mesh well with him the most in terms of personality. Plus, after this chapter, Coco's gonna wanna meet the guy that helped her teammate out.

Neo...well, she apparently likes assertive men, so there. Something to build off of. Then again, her criminality might be a turn off for him...maybe. Only you know what he's fully like.

Winter because...eh. Both are military soldiers. And maybe a mission might make them respect each other, and maybe Winter might be curious about Chris. Or something like that, I don't know.

And so with all that said...here's my OC! :D

Name: Rowan Steele

Age: 21

Sex: Male

Race: Human

Appearance: Steel-grey hair, bright crimson eyes, medium build, 5'11, camoflauge combat uniform and gear.

Personality: He's silent unless spoken to. He exudes an aura that keeps people from getting too close, as he only speaks to people he likes and gets along with. (his squad mates, for instance)

Backstory: He was a thief at a young age, and he was good at it. His luck ran out when he tried to rob a military officer, Argent Steele. Rather than have him arrested, Argent chose to take Rowan in as his own. It was a rocky relationship at first, but Rowan eventually warmed up to Argent and even took up his last name after a time. Wanting to follow in his adopted father's footsteps, Rowan joined the military and eventually became part of the Deep Eyes unit. He has been a part of the unit for three years up till this point in the story.

Callsign: Hunter

Profession: Scout/CQC specialist

And that's about it. :v

I would like too pair chris to Yang but just in case it won't work do it with neo, cinder, or glynda or even winter. If you doing sex with then do so with other like Yang, neo, cinder, glynda. Or anyone you choose but if not then I apologize anyway how long to continue you this I like to heard more of it.

So far, I like the story. Here's an OC I guess.

Name: "John" - Amnesiac. John isn't his real name.

Age: 18-20

Sex: Male

Race: Human

Appearance: John wears a jacket a black jacket which has a suit and tie underneath. Both are black. Scars are not visible on John, but there are indeed damages on his clothing. He has black jeans and black shoes. He usually wears his hood. Overall, he would be mistaken for an emo if it wasn't for his weapon which isn't a scythe. His skin is colored a light shade.

Personality: John is eccentric. Like Nora, but mixed with the personalities of those around him at current time. He's an oddity of a person and often forgets the simple things. When surrounded by at least five people, his personality will be mixed with those 5 along with sounding insane, drunk, or humorous. When serious, he drops his personality and his face goes to a neutral expression. He's also a drunk Russian.

He is also skilled at detecting presences, has a cane that transforms into a sniper rifle, and always has a secondary weapon. His secondary is just a classic pistol. The main reason for the cane is because his adaptability in close quarters, allowing him to trip opponents and fire with a quick draw. His personality is that of someone who favors others over himself because of his amnesia.

Backstory: Unknown, not recoverable. This character has lost his memories and has been this way for a year. He joined Atlas as a sniper with his own custom cane. He is capable of rendering opponents unconscious and twirling people around with the cane, but he never chooses a close quarters attacker. He's always a marksman, sniper, or Support

Call Sign: "Amnesiac" - Mostly because I couldn't find a better name.

Profession: Marksman, Sniper, or Support.

Accuracy: 95% (Far Above Average)
Skill With Melee Weapons: 74% (Above Average)
IQ: 95
Skill With Ranged Weapons: 95%
Flight skills: 25% (Far below average)
Skill in general: Professional Sniper, mediocre pilot, professional marksman, amateur swordsman, above average cane fighter.
Agility: He's flexible, but not too flexible.
Height: 5'11
Affiliation: Atlas, Mercenary.
Weapon: A walking cane that can change into a sniper rifle. He can use the walking cane to grapple people's limbs and fling them away.
Secondary: A normal military pistol.

Sound good? You can change him all you want, except that cane needs to stay!