This was wonderful. I really, really liked it!

I would have thoroughly enjoyed some more length to it, particularly towards the beginning. The angst and tension were written very well. I wanted to learn more about the circumstances that were bringing such torment to Saeyoung. Some reminiscing or memories or more conversation between the player and him. That would have extended the uncertainty and pain our characters go through that is later soothed with love and comfort, which I think would have even added more to the story.

But beyond that, I loved the descriptive words and imagery. It was quite beautiful. Thanks for sharing!

SO goooooood!

I've always imagined Seven to be like this!
Thank you!

Wonderfully written. Thank you for this!