damn.
Damn.
DAMN!

Can you make a fanfiction about a woman who meets a skeleton

In all honesty, the comic didn't have the correct effect on me. Instead of the usual, I just busted a gut.

This fanfic was hilarious from start to finish. ... I know it wasn't intended that way, but for me it was funny. Sorry.

As for critique. It's actually well written. Mostly good grammer and good sentence structure, some mistakes, but that's pretty normal around here. By the standarts of the site, it's doing very well on that front too.
The characters are often OOC, but it wouldn't work otherwise, so it's absolutely fine.

So this get's a rating of 4.5/5.

Actually Lucy is in the can get pregnant category, Lola and Lana might be slightly too young. How old are they again... 4 is too young. Youngest mother was 5, depending on if her age was really recorded from start. Or she might be actually 6.

This was weird, and maybe a little creepy, but interesting

Lisa is really going to hurt Lori, I'm just glad Luna's baby is okay, now Lincoln has a son

Lisa is so evil in this story and I feel bad for Leni, really, stillborn is a hard thing to deal with

How the hell does a story with THIS kind of premise get away with a T rating?!

Fuck this.

Ugh, I love Lisa, and I knew all too damn well I shouldn’t have read this utterly soul crushing garbage.

I agree, this should be interesting.

FINDING NEMO REFERENCES

Um, Lisa just legitimately cursed. Now she’s doing what? This has become weird an I’m lost. Is Lisa still the same height, just with boobs and a fat ass?

Luan: I don’t wanna make Lisa the “butt” of my jokes, however..