Holy balls this is brutal, still a good read though.

Amazing. Fucking Amazing. This fic makes me wish fo4 still had the karmic system, however flawed it was, it was still enjoyable. Man you've really nailed a threatening sole survivor character.

Jeez man, did you have to shoot macreedy in the face? you couldnt even let him die with his looks?

God damn Jack, I said god damn! You do not dissapoint. You are the first person to write the sole survivor as a character I would actually be hesitant to face as a gamer, your work itself is well done, and I love how even you OC's are meshing as well as they are. To top it off even though this chapter is short it is lacking all the annoying BS others put in to try to pad out their chapters. Love to read this and can't wait to see more!

I love this story it's so good can't wait for the next Chapter!

This was a messed up chapter as usual

Your writing is great but the contents of chapters 6 and 7 is a bit much for me.
Good luck.

Your story is awesome!

This is freaking awesome.
'hugs'

[I fought them until I went insane.]

From her actions, it sounds like she's already gone insane. Well adjusted people don't go on massive killing sprees and then mutilate the corpses afterwards.

This is far too short for a first chapter. Remember that your first chapter is your opportunity to hook your reader – in other words, to show them what makes your story unique and worth reading.