Very good. I loved your way of explaining the different artifact weapons and who wields them. You obviously did a lot of research/play time to get everything just right. Your characterization is very good as well.

Also, Zabra is amazing. Trolls are the best.

This is off to a really great start. It's well written, with well drawn characters and an interesting premise. Looking forward to seeing where you take the story.

This is looking really good! Can't wait to read more about the interactions between Lythea and Ellesa! Keep up the good work!