| Reviews for Lana Adventure to Confessing Ash |
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  Whitney greys chapter 4 . 8/26 Your grammar and punctuation is all accurate , but I have got to say , you have a fine way of telling stories. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/12 This story was very good especially the epilogue and it is so happy. The 5 years later thing is very happy especially when she says I am so happy I have a loving family. It made me cry tears of joy |
| Euphoxion chapter 5 . 12/16/2019 It was amazing |
| Guest chapter 6 . 11/19/2019 njnondvz |
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/30/2019 Good story. You should make a similar story of Lana and Cameron |
| Isaacsbestgirl chapter 6 . 6/10/2019 Pls no mallow fic if that's okay ssh belong with Lillie and Lana three some might be cool tho |
 LeftKiller chapter 1 . 6/5/2019 Hello, I would like to translate your story. Can I do this? |
| WafleKouhai chapter 1 . 3/24/2019 Que bonita historia |
| DjFox Gamer098 chapter 4 . 3/16/2019 everyone has one of those ash x lana books xD |
| Whers kakui chapter 5 . 12/9/2018 Wher kakui |
| 777 chapter 1 . 12/9/2018 love it its the best bu u spelldd some words wrong no worries i figured out what wer they supose to bee |
| YouChoose chapter 4 . 11/28/2018 You’re really good at the whole storytelling. If you ever need anymore help with grammer or punctuation you can just ask someone,judging on your work I doubt they would mind |
| Anonymous Pokemon chapter 3 . 11/25/2018 Ash is crossing the line from dense to just plain stupid. |
| Hmmmmm chapter 6 . 8/18/2018 Awwwwww this is ending to quick! It’s so cuteeeeeer :3 Anyway I love this series! |
| Hmmmmm chapter 4 . 8/18/2018 I have to say, you are a great blueangle shipping writer, I love your story (also Lana is always the best girl XD) |
