Ugh! My heart!

what he heck! you just stopped at infected! come on you gotta put more than that!

what it just ends!

Me: /finds a very cool, interesting story/
Story: /doesn't continue/
Me: /cries/

When is the next chapter coming out

noo just no, don't kill off a good start to a story you had in chapter 1 like this

I don't like how Qrow is still lying.. This is him supposedly coming out and telling the truth...

Hello, this story is very interesting and i hope you will update early. I love this theory of qrow, but please, don't make salem and summer the same person(i really, really hate thath story)

Why you do that at Ruby? Monster, you have no feelings. By the way nice fic, I hope you can update soon. Where is Yang?

well could the silver eyed warrior powers be used to purge the infection from ruby

Ahhhh this is so cute! I can't wait to read more!

Interesting, it is good to see this story continued, you did a good job for this chapter :)

Black lines...that...isn't looking good. Please, ppplllleaaaaaase continue this. And also, Ruby's head is hurting. I'm putting my two cents in on her turning into a Salem-type demon.

Qrow's got his work cut out. Can't wait for more, love daddy Qrow that's my Headcanon.

Esto es tan genial... quiero ver si algo como esto se da en verdad.

"...black lines running along Ruby's wrist." What the hell, black lines. What does that mean? By mentioning a similarity that Ruby apparently shares with Salem deserves more then a one-shot.

You need to post more than this.