| Reviews for Unexpected |
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  Guest chapter 4 . 7/1 Great writing! |
 reppad98 chapter 5 . 6/25/2019 Nice to see another chapter for this collection! It was quite a funny one, too. With Shang's pokerface I'm surprised he lost, but I suppose Mulan is a whole lot better at keeping up an act haha. Thanks for updating, I liked it, and keep writing! ! |
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/5/2019 "because Naked!Shang was definitely on her to-do list for the night" - oh my gosh I loved that line XD. This oneshot was really funny, and the whole concept kinda reminds me of the "strip mahjong" line in Mulan jr except better. |
| seraphina987 chapter 5 . 4/4/2019 Thanks for the update |
| HorseStar1 chapter 1 . 9/15/2018 It works for them. I like it. I feel like I've read this fix before in the Anastasia section. Instead of Pooka and Anastasia , Mulan tells Khan. Both Shang and Dimitri are hard to talk to (but so is she). They both need friction. Anya and Mulan are both pregnant. And they both need a bigger house for someone else in the family, because their husband is going to be a father (is that what this is about? A bigger house?) It works for either couple though and may be entirely coincidental - I assume little - but I can't help but draw parallels. For the record, both fics are very well written and I can see this scenario between Shang and Mulan quite easily. |
| SapphiRubyCrys chapter 1 . 7/2/2018 Aww i can clearly picture this happening |
| With Pen and Paper chapter 4 . 5/1/2018 Ok this was too cute |
| SunRise19 chapter 4 . 3/29/2018 I really liked this! At first I was a little confused by the start of this one-shot, but it all came together nicely and I think this is brilliant! I needed to read that message about true love. For it is very very real. |
| C'Riverblade chapter 4 . 3/11/2018 Ya know. I’m glad it’s ling who visited them. |
| reppad98 chapter 4 . 3/8/2018 Ah, I hadn't read these one-shots yet, so when I got a notification for this last chapter it was a nice surprise to see that there were more. And though it's been ages since I've seen Mulan, it was nice to read these sweet little stories about Mulan and Shang. I definitely liked the first one, although I could already guess what that unexpected thing was going to be. But I liked the description in the beginning, about how everything about Mulan was unexpected to Shang and the other way around. I also liked this last chapter, I would really like to see more reactions of people to their relationship or to their pregnancy - like Grandma Fa, I bet she would be so happy XD The second chapter was sweet and realistic, it's a very nice touch to show that not everything in life is about roses. Thank you for writing these one-shots, I liked them and I hope to see more, and keep writing! ! |
| parietheplatypus chapter 4 . 3/6/2018 This is really great stuff! I can't wait for more! Your writing style is amazing! :3 |
| Shadowdapple chapter 4 . 3/6/2018 MORE! Please, it's so good! |
| Megan Lyle chapter 4 . 3/6/2018 This is a awesome and funny chapter! Keep writing. |
| StarAF938 chapter 3 . 8/25/2017 Awesome! Please update soon! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/1/2017 cielos eso fue horrible pobre lo entiendo las pesadillas son un asco |
