Reviews for Patronus Maximus |
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thegrison chapter 1 . 8/31 Well thought out story and well written. However very boring and dull mostly due to the slow pace of the story. Just had this even bored tone to it. Good luck. |
Olie chapter 12 . 8/28 Worst fucking marvel fanfic I've ever read lol |
Jade chapter 5 . 8/28 Is this really Naruto!? I feel like I’m reading a normal guy that reincarnated into marvel instead of Naruto himself... why is he role playing as a weak assassin? This is kinda wack |
hennessyswagg83 chapter 46 . 7/24 You stated that Fujimai was a boy at birth now you saying girl and I realize the Makasi and Ashla genders are opposite granted Masaki is unisex but Ashla is a girls name and you the brother introduced himself as Ashla last chapter |
hennessyswagg83 chapter 45 . 7/24 You forgot you had them 6 weeks apart didn't you but I'm sure you can create some situation why they'll giving birth at the same time |
Torcastic chapter 46 . 6/30 When do you plan to update your story |
Torcastic chapter 46 . 6/18 What are the genders of the kids of kuroka and rhea? In other chapters they're a boy and girl respectively. Then Inari says they're girl? |
rasengen9 chapter 25 . 6/16 Lara thinks she is entitled to know everything. When she doesn't she gets upset. I agree with Inari that he doesn't have to tell everything. Naruto is a ninja but still doesn't understand that you can't tell everyone ur secrets. Should have talked with his family and friends before telling everything. Some, people don't want there stuff out or be known by others |
anonimo chapter 46 . 5/31 wiki/White_Fox |
Guest chapter 46 . 5/30 I hope you post soon |
Vampirenick chapter 46 . 5/21 Still a great story! Can the next world be in the Ninja Gaiden universe? |
anonimo chapter 46 . 5/9 Gorr, The God Butcher es perfect man. |
Jerm069 chapter 46 . 5/2 This is an awesome story! |
IMMORTALCRUSADE chapter 13 . 4/25 I have a question is he immortal? Because last chapter you stated that a battle between a mortal and a god? I'm confuse right now is Naruto going to be Immortal? Or already an Immortal and is Saeko will also be an Immortal? |
Jerm069 chapter 1 . 4/25 I had no idea where that was heading, but it was cool at the end! Can't wait to read more. |