I'm really glad i came back to this, i enjoyed it just as much as i did the first time i read it

Continue this story or I swear Daveed will crawl out of it and me and him are gonna knock down your door and make you.
The OTP are finally together and I need to see how their relationship goes.

Your now continues follower and fan on your story,
Diana

Dear author, I have a few things that need improving:

For one, the entire premise. Your character is an affront to the private life of Lin-Manuel Miranda, and does a disservice to his wife and family. I ask you to delete this story out of respect for him. Your weak excuse—"don't like, don't read/ just think of Brady as a young Vanessa"—simply doesn't hold up under the light pressure of moral logic. In the case of "don't like, don't read", well, you responded to my PM saying that you listen to all criticism equally (although you don't necessarily take it all to heart). Saying "don't like, don't read" is a way of avoiding negative criticism, and it's a tactic I've seen far too often on this site.

Your other excuse, "just think of Brady as a young Vanessa", is even worse. Brady is not Vanessa. Brady isn't even an interesting character! (More about that later.) Even if we are to assume you're pretending that Brady's Vanessa, then you're still disrespecting the privacy of Vanessa's life! Did you ask for her consent to publish her as Brady? I assume not. You are using a private figure—who just happens to be married to a celebrity—as a cutout for your little fangirl fantasy! It's awful. Imagine if you got married, and then your spouse got super-famous, and then random people on the Internet started publishing fan-stories that replace you. It's awfully forward of them, don't you think?

Furthermore, it violates Fanfiction's code—don't use real people in your stories. It's very uncool.

On Brady herself: She's boring. I'm just going to say it. How to improve? That's really up to you, as the author. It's pretty typical for an OC (in the Hamilton fandom) to just be really good at singing, dancing, be passionate for Broadway, etc. etc. Make something new. Maybe she's one of ~those~ people who hate musicals? Give her some more quirks. I know you want to "develop her character", but you can't develop something that is simply not there!

Sincerely,
Your Friendly Neighborhood Socrates (Throwing Verbal Rocks At These Mediocrities)

Awesome!

This story is wonderful! You always keep me guessing and interested. Keep it up.

Just started reading and I have seven favorites from how sweet and ridiculously cute this story is. Please update soon!

I found this like a month ago and I ADORE it. I've absolutely fallen in love with it. Please continue with the awesomeness.

Don't feel so bad for not updating, I have an ongoing fic that I have such bad writer's block for, it's not been updated in at least 6 years.
This however, has been updated over time, and OH MY GOD LIN AND BRADY ARE SO CUTE
I knew something was going to happen when she went to the apartment, but then you pull that out and AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! HHHH!

YYYEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSS omg yes. I just... Yes. I love it, I love it so much, I love your writing, I love your characters, I love Lin, I love the (on my part) completely unexpected steamy scenes with them, I love it. You are such a wonderful writer and I am so glad you updated, and it doesn't matter that you haven't updated in a butt-long time because you did it in the end, and that's all that matters. I can't even believe this story has been going a year, that's incredible. I hope the new year brings the best for you!

AHHHHH I JUST KEEEP RE READING BECAUSE IM WATING FOR UPDATES *I CRY* PLEASE UPDATE

OMG IM CRYING WTF. IM SO HAPPY TO HAVE DISCOVERED THIS STORY. I’m so saddddddd please update please please please. I love this story so much. You’re such a good writer please update pleaseeeeee

thanks for the update. it's still so good. update when you can!

I still love it

dude we could NEVER HATE YOU

you’re kinda like a really good cheese - you’re amazing all the time, either when you have it right away or you wait a bit for the flavor to bolden

what sorry i like cheese a lot

anyway ooOOh brady girl oh shiz you really did it huh oh goodness

welp

that’s one road to couple recovery i guess...?

hahaha can’t wait for next time (don’t forget what I said abt the cheese tho!)

HOLY CRAP YOU’RE ALIVE! I HONESTLY THOUGHT YOU WERE DEAD! I’M SO HAPPY RIGHT NOW!

You have no idea how long I’ve waited for this to be updated. I mean, I know this is called “Wait For It” but not updating is a cruel way of making a pun.
Very cruel.

Who am I kidding? I’m just so happy that you’re still alive and writing to be upset!
Also, thanks for the shoutout! XD
And I’m so glad Lin and Brady finally got together! This took way too long! Or at least it feels that way.
Okay I have to go to class now so bye~

(AND DON’T YOU DARE LEAVE ME AGAIN!)