I'm so so so so so excited you have updated this story! i was absolutely enthralled with it and was entirely sad not to have another chapter. Thank you for the update!

Really good story!

this was better than the first story..not that i'm into bdsm or anything and you still are saying they have hands instead of paws but the story plot seems sound and both seem to be on the right path to a nice lemon scene. 7 outa 10

50 shades of a grey bunny

This is actually some decent armature BDSM roll playing!
Few times have I seen story's roll out so smooth!
This needs to continue! :D

I really enjoyed reading this. The changing power dynamic going of with Nick and Judy, control switching back and forth between them was great.

Where is chapter 5? I need it!

Nice cozy little restaurant scene.
So, is the bunny dominatrix going to take her puppy for a walk? Kind of sounds like it. Hopefully there is some give and take for both of them so it is not totally one-sided.

Bet you 20$ that it's a collar and dog tag with a leash. Riiiiiggggggghhhhhtttt? :)

You should have Nick embrace his Nudist spirit and pretend he's a dog on a leash and do a bunch of cute stunts-tricks and even nuzzle and purr like a cat on Judy. Then have him lay on his back getting a belly rub/seductive massage from Judy and repeat with what happened in the restaurant, only this time, No. Holding. BACK! Judy gets him aroused and sees his "endowedism" and u take it from here. Oh and uh, if they do get to "ride it out" then, have Judy as the "cherry on top" cowgirl style... ;) I hope this helps.

& KEEP HIM COMMANDO! AND THANX! I LOVE THIS!

Don't stop! PLZ! & HAVE NICK BE THE NAKED ONE! ON THE LEASH!

See, I was with it right up until now. Now, the red flags are going up. I'm fine with a bit of bondage, but everything I'm seeing here seems like it's about to move into public humiliation.

The Dog Park? I'm almost willing to bet money that predators will also have to walk around on all fours. I get the whole "control" aspect, but that would be going too far; blatantly treating predators like they're inferior and don't deserve to walk upright. I draw the line at that kind of thing; makes me lose all respect for the character who submits to it, and makes me wonder how their partner could have any respect for them either. Because despite what porn and popular culture would have you believe, there IS an element of mutual respect in BDSM. A very large element, in fact.

Let me be clear: I'm not saying I can predict the future, and I'm not condemning the story for things that haven't happened. Just saying that I'm seeing things that are tripping my literary Spidey-Sense. I've been fooled before. It starts with a little bit of dom/sub play, maybe a bit of roughness; then next thing you know a guy is blindfolded and tied to a rack, with a buttplug up his ass and drinking his girlfriend's piss while she smacks him in the balls.

Extreme? Absolutely. But that's the kind of shit I've seen, and it comes up with no clear warning, so I've learned to look for the small things. Any kind of hint that things are about to escalate very quickly. When it comes to fanfiction, or really any kind of internet story, I'm more jaded and cynical than Nick could ever be.

FOR THE LOVE OF APHRODITE, JUST HIT US WITH IT! I'M ON THE EDGE OF LOSING MY F*****G MIND!

I would absolutely LOVE it if you were to post the next chapter for this. I come back every few weeks to see if its updated...it seriously is one of the hottest fanfics I've read. Please update this!