please create an alternate ending. But I do understand. .. and I'll follow this in hopes you make an alternate. Good job

well Scott dying so wrong, but I do understand that killing that woman, was heavy on Scott mind, but him dying, Stiles would also stop living since what kept him alive after his beloved mom died was Scott.

well, this will be problematic, if the hunters discover this, they will kill Scott

keep it up!

that was sad :(
but keep it up

Yeah full on out, it is rated m
I can help on that if you want, I can talk to some of my friends. One helps me the most for when I try write those scenes
If you want

yea I thought the ending says he will, but nope. but really, you should post two ending versions. you're making me cry with this love-ish story! why would you do that to Derek?! whyyyy

or you could post two versions of the ending. and poor Scott, he needs to see that Derek do love him, even though he's not showing a lot. awesome chapter! :D

Oh!
End it with them making love! Having creek initiate it!
That might hero change Scotts point of view

Loved it!
Keep up the good work

oh no, Derek is self doubting himself. Scott really needs to control that emotion, he's in love and panicked a lot. not a good combination.
awesome chapter! gonna be sad that the fic will end in. a couple chapters (more or less)!

Keep up the scerek
I love it!
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Update soon!

aww that's so cute, I keep smiling and now I think I can't stop!
keep up the awesome work! :D

Haha!
Keep it up
This. Was cute
:)

Will it be scerek?
I love it!?