Cool! Is there another chapter for this story?

This is actually really good.

Cool! Is there another chapter for this story?

totally awesome and can't wait to read the next one.

You going to make more?

I can't believe there's seven chapters of this. I'm not going to lie: this is very hard to read. Do you proof-read before you post? If not, I suggest you start. Not only are there typos, purposeful or not, everywhere (I mean... Hukfoo?) and grammar spiraling off into orbit (your story description gave me a brain aneurysm), but the overall layout is both cluttered and disjointed, and it's especially hard to dig through the dialogue. Try spacing out the dialogue more with a new line for when a new character is speaking. It's a decently interesting plot and the characterization isn't bad for the canon characters - (I especially appreciate how you don't shy away from writing characters like the Enforcers or Uncle, like so many other writers in this fandom do, so huge kudos to that) - but overall, the whole thing's just one big eyesore. If you take the time to apply proper spelling and grammar, this will be a very good that I'd love to read. Good luck.