Oh man, my emotions are so overpowering right now. This has definitely got to be one of my favorite Lost Boys stories where the main character kicks butt and is not a damsel. Your world building was amazing, and every character was just how I can picture them being. Very in-character, even when human again. I would die if there was a sequel where we see Riss and David in their relationship. Would be interesting to see how David handles being human again, and how Riss can help him with tackling many human customs he hasn't been used to in years. Again, wow. I don't think I will ever forget this story. What a treat. Thank you for all your hard work!

Words can't even describe how much I love this story. It's so different from all of the other Lost Boys stories I've read. The idea of using humans as feeding practice for young vampires was so interesting! I was so pleased with the ending as well. Thanks for giving me the chance to read your story. It was amazing. Well done! (:

Really good story! Glad Bree and Riss excepted David and Marko back! Too bad about Dwayne and Paul...

awesome and enjoyable story to read :)

Very much enjoyed this story! Awesome to see some lost boys ff. Thank you for writing!

Amazing. Truly in love with your storytelling and how you incorporated the movie but twisted it to make a happy ending. Really enjoyed how you wrote the boys too, especially David, and your original characters. Riss was great! Not your typical midnight snack or damsel in distress. Looking forward to reading more from you!

:) When you chose "His Eye Is On The Sparrow", I immediately thought of that scene too. :)
I really love your story, and I am adding it to my favorites. Thank you.

Aww, that was a good story! I love it! Not thrilled you kept Dwayne and Paul dead but I like this new take on the characters you've done. This was a great read!

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This was such a great story, and such a great take on the boys! I am really pleased with how open you are about your faith - it's really very inspiring and encouraging! Your OCs were well-rounded and believable and I empathized with them, which can be tricky to make happen, but you did it very well. The poem at the end was the PERFECT conclusion to everything, I'm very impressed. Well done, my dear!

Aww so sweet

Loved it. Thanks. Xxx

I love the idea and inspiration that story gives...

LOVE LOVE LOVE THE ENDING! :D

Ah ha! Now I know what you were getting at in the beginning. I know I haven't reviewed each chapter but I've been keeping up. This has been a great story! You are right, as canon goes David did survive and so did Marko. However, killing Max wouldn't turn them human again. They are still vampires, at least in the Lost Boys universe. But the idea of them being able to go back to the girls is very sweet and sentimental, especially as humans.