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Pls

hahahaha, this was great!

I know you wrote this awhile back, but this is brilliant! I love that the whole thing is from Alya and Nino's perspective, and yet how you still are able to tell us exactly what is progressing between Mari and Adrien's discoveries of one another, but of course Alya doesn't understand the clues that the readers do. And Nino's revelation at the very end! And the last line! I just love how you show everything and tell us nothing! It's so well done! Nice work! And happy writing!

SO. CUTE. And they called Marinette and Adrien blind... HAHA At least Nino got it. Loved it!

This is my one of my favorite fanfic! Fangirling!

This was hilariously great! Love seeing the reveal from someone else's POV.

Hahahahaha. I loved this. I found it incredible how you put the story together, it really made a difference. Great story and plot. Congratulations. 333

I'm guessing that Nino figured it out in the end?

Wooooowwwww this was seriously the most adorable thing ever. :)
I like how you had it from the point of view of Alya, it was really interesting and very cleverly done.
Great job with this!

So I absolutely loved this piece from beginning to end. I love your characterizations and Alya's wild personality when she's chasing one of her theories. I almost wish this wasn't just a one-shot. Thank you for sharing!

Love this story!

HHAHAHAHAAH!

This was great. I loved the style you wrote it in, flashbacks in the form of exhibits that Alya doesn't completely understand. I love how it ended the way it started as well. It really tied up the style very well and made it conclusive yet still open ended. It gave a distinct "here we go again" impression.

I loved the scene with Marinette and Chat. Perfection. The flirting. The tension. Just...

Talking about Adrien.

Beautiful

i loved it! esp alya's detailed examples lmaooo and i appreciate nino's character flair in the beg even if it almost deterred from continuing to read