Reviews for Deity's Annihilation |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So far your story is coming along fairly well. There are some spelling mistakes and some sentences aren’t structured properly, but overall, I’d give your story a 6.5 out of 10. I understand that Rias and Issei love each other and that Issei is emotionally damaged, but I am getting a little tired of them always crying and holding each other after something. It gets repetitive and starts to feel unoriginal. So far, that’s my biggest issue. I look forward to your next chapter. |
![]() ![]() dude ur such a good writer. while reading i cried a little bit and it has been so long since i cried on a fanfic but it made me so happy to see what some people can write and i was wondering if in the future chapters u will make sairaog fight with issei or someone new that u invent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do hope he doesn't become a devil since i was actually looking for fanfiction of powerful human issei i am on chapter 1 right now if he does become a devil i will read your fanfic anyway it's becoming good xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks and God blessed you and until the next chapter then. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I see |
![]() ![]() ![]() The main idea had promise but you just dumped power on him for no reason no real working for it girls throwing themselves at his feet he's basically emo and the fights are laughable I started skimming entire chapters because the marry sue levels were so frustrating. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can you please update Denying Fate as soon as possible if you can, it’s my favorite of all your stories but this story is still fine. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter I'm really looking forward to the next one |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welcome back man |
![]() ![]() So this story isn't dead? YYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cant wait to see a long awaited update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I didn't think I would see this one updated ever again. Nice to see that you're alive tho. |
![]() ![]() ![]() UPDATED IN 2020 PLEASE. Like the hold story and add sona and serafall to issei harem. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fun story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyed it |