i think the author will not finish this story, i hope i was wrong.

I picked Litten and play Moon! I also have Sun, but really, who plays both anymore? Is it strange that I rarely use Lunala in my party? I feel like legendaries are more for show than they are useful...

Has this story been discontinued? That would be a shame, as it was quite good.

Ayy, what an awesome chappie! :D I really like the banter, and the little humorous quips you have inside.

My favourite Z-move? Subzero Slammer (the ice one) is one of my favourites because it's just so cool to look at (GOT THE PUN? COOL? ICE? COLD? COOL?) XD

Great chapter. I'm happy to see how the battle went. Really shows the different personalities the two characters has. I also like seeing some Pokemon ranger action. I feel most people ignore them.

This is probably the last time I write a review in a few months cause I'm going to the Navy tomorrow. I'm happy to read this before I go.

My favorite Z-Move is Oceanic Operetta because I think it looks pretty.

Great chapter! I really enjoyed it! Keep up the good work!

We didn't get much here but I understand that sometimes SYOC Chapter 1/prologues are like that. I'm looking forward to reading more though! I think I'll submit an OC, and my answer to the QOTC is BOTH! Because I'm a completionist and have done this for as long as I can remember (This being buying both games from a set).

I like the realistic approach, gives a better approach to the battles.

My favorite Z-moves are Corkscrew Crash, Sinster Arrow Raid, and 7-Star Strike. The moves fit so well, and the animations for them are amazing.

Nice! The battle was really exciting and I enjoyed the realistic approach. Kinda miffed Sienna didn't get her story though...

The rattatta's going to be important later one, aren't they? And meeting some of the scientists and
Rangers was pretty cool. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Keep up the good work!

Great job and Blackhole Eclipse,

My favorite Z-Moves are Breakneck Blitz, Never-Ending Nightmare, Corkscrew Crash and Tectonic Rage

My favorite Z Move is definitely Z conversion. I loved the bits with the rangers, and I still adore Anya and her Pokémon. I'm looking forward to how the story progresses, and I can't wait to see the OCs all come in.

I like the Dean. She seems to be my type of woman. Her ideals for the school is nice and original in my opinion.

Can't wait to see the first real Pokemon battle. I think sienna is going to win because of being underestimated by Anya.

Hmm...This story is shaping up to be really interesting. I don't only intend to keep reading if you accept my character or anything but I hope you liked him even if he ends up not being used. Sienna's my favorite character so far because she reminds of some friends I have with her hyper and out of controlness. Jazz strongly reminds me of my younger brother especially when he was a junior. This is a very entertaining and exciting story and your characters are well developed and being forged well and this is only by the first day of school. I think Sienna will put up a good fight but end up losing by the end.
Warm Regards,
Jay Hayden

You have a way with dialogue. owo

So far most of the scenes are amusing. Dr. Knowlton seems like a typical "wow-she's-scary-but-in-an-amazing-way" dean. I like her character and look forward to what she'll do.

Anya's gonna win. That record is amazing. Plus, I don't believe that Sienna's able to get the story that easily.