it was a good read. and changing ideas is always fun. and just further proof of how far this has come. i can't wait for the next one

Awesome, can't wait for the next fic. Thanks a lot for writing. Keep it up!

What’s the sequel going to be called?

Sad to hear this story is nearly over... but glad i've read it thus far. pretty interesting as to where you are going to draw the line as to when to stop this and start the sequels. going to be an interesting ride regardless. keep this kind of thing up.

A lot of misspellings and improper grammar.

Its a great story! I cant wait read more!

I really hope they all get their happy ending...

Awwww! Love this series. Hope Bumbleby works out. I'm not so sure about Whiterose. What Weiss did is wrong, but you can see she feels remorseful. Maybe she can change. Thanks for writing. Keep it up!

Thanks for the shoutout. chapter as a whole was interesting. We got some more back story, we got some Bumbleby... and then some extra interactions... all of which I enjoyed. keep this up.

i meant character stories in this story, but that was my bad for not explaining better. but i really liked this chapter. only complaint is could have said some German sayings and translated it in either of the notes and named one or two German paintings.

but one German saying does come to mind to describe Weiss or her violent side at least... shadenfreude. look it up if you don't know what it means.

i can't wait for the next chapter.

More PLease!

Any plans for Yang and Ruby's big talk that they sorely need?
At least Ruby is responding positively to Pyrrha's help...

I also hope Blake know what she's doing but I have doubts

well, that was an enjoyable chapter. just enough information seeping through to keep a reader interested. personally I'd still love to see more of what is going on with Weiss and Ruby. if just for the sake to agree with your point of you having focused mostly on Yang and Blake. don't rush one story line in this story to make room for another. finally some advice, schedules in this are always hard to keep unless you have serious will power, just keep a semi steady almost regular flow. even if it was once a month, people will look forward to that.

Awwww, sorry to hear about that. Well thanks for updating, and it's never a problem to wait. Take care of everything in your personal life first and then come back when you can. Thanks again for writing. Keep it up!

I hope you're okay and out of danger; also, good luck with your schedule.

Yang and Ruby really are at rock bottom or it seems to me...and I¿m getting curious about what happened to Pyrrha in the past...
This plot is really getting tangled and I'm at the dge pf my seat thinking how will all of this end?