Reviews for Eleven Steps Forward, Two Steps Back
sweetie21 chapter 3 . 12/4/2017
wonderful job
mednin chapter 3 . 7/23/2017
It's good that you mentioned things changing and things take work. Good work!
mednin chapter 2 . 7/23/2017
I like how real you were with Kevin's unnamed spouse. It's a touchy subject that should be addressed. Hopefully that was something changed in the future, but you never know. We probably won't know, if ever, who the potential spouse is (though I cross my fingers it's really Gwen!).

I think it was confirmed he did marry her, though certain things changed in the future. Like Ben's child Gwendolyn does not exist anymore (multi-theory).

That's a good backstory you have for Laki. It would be good to read about it you ever decide to write it.

I assumed Gwen and Kevin are/were in a monogamous relationship.

I'm really interested in this subject as you can tell. I wish the writers would answer the question so I can have some closure!
AM83220 chapter 3 . 2/12/2017
Very well-written fic! Nice work, and I especially appreciate that you wrote it to explain a seemingly inexplicable error in continuity, which I think is one of the main purposes of fanfiction.
WonderPickle chapter 3 . 12/30/2016
wow...i fell i love with this story in two short chapters...this was so wonderful! i love these characters, and i love them as a couple, and your writing just portrayed them so well! gwevin is so beautiful, and this story captured pretty much all of the aspects of them as characters and their relationship! seeing more gwevin stories, especially such well written ones, always warms my heart! love love love this story!
RenkonNairu chapter 3 . 12/29/2016
A fantastic fic! And to think, I never even would have FOUND this fic if you hadn't favored one of my one Gwevin fics earlier this month. Thank you for much for that and thank you for posting this. There isn't nearly enough Gwevin in the archives. Those of us that still hang around need to stick together!
gingeralchemist1996 chapter 1 . 12/27/2016
Very good story! Certainly serves as a good filler for questions people were going over in their heads.