Reviews for The Twelve Days of Christmas
Nami chapter 13 . 7/17
Ohh! I was having kind of bad day and I found this fanfic! This warmed my heart so much! This story is so beautiful, I don't know how I didn't see this before since Nejiten is my fav ship. I've read your other stories and you have such a great talent! Your writing is so good to read! Thank you for the work 3
stronger13 chapter 13 . 5/15
Goshhhh. A truly wonderful NejiTen AU! Why did I just found this gem now? I really lile the plot and how the story developed. It was gradual but very detailed. Neji and Tenten seem to be really attached to one another even in their small ways! Thank you! Thank you for making my NejiTen heart happy, blissful and content.

While reading through the chapters, I can’t help but stop everytime something sweet and romantic happens. I could just paus , smile, and givhle and let my heart flutter into colorful butterflies!
stronger13 chapter 11 . 5/15
Huhuhu. This is emotional.
stronger13 chapter 3 . 5/15
Awwww. Hahaha. I’m thrilled.
ferbfletcherlover chapter 13 . 4/25
Beautiful! Much love. Thank you GL! ️
ferbfletcherlover chapter 11 . 4/25
Wow just wow! I almost cried with Tenten. You write things so beautifully. I super love this story and looking forward to how this will end. Thank you for sharing such beautiful work. NejiTen will be so proud ️
ZShaq chapter 13 . 11/14/2019
I don’t know if you’ll ever see this because the story was finished forever ago. But thank you. You just made a grown man cry. This story is now a personal tradition. I am going to read this every Christmas until I stop liking fanfiction. You are amazing. Thank you.
hannahzerofive chapter 13 . 8/17/2019
I love what you did with NejiTen, usually Neji is portrayed as an a-hole while Tenten is a stubborn brat. But you wrote them with so much humanity, both of them have faults both of them want something from each other. You cannot take sides because they're so human. They don't argue because of some hidden secret or a misunderstanding. No. They have a hard time loving and accepting because they're human beings with emotions and feelings. They want happiness but it's very hard to obtain because it's just is. there's no Ex-girlfriend or boyfriend that's getting in the way of emotional trauma too deep to be fix or helped. In premises like this affection is mostly one sided until the very end, which makes the story unrealistic and quite frankly boring. But here! Oh. My. God. Just... oh my god, I wrote to much already so I'll just say one last thing THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST FANFICTION IVE EVER READ
oatsoyapeanutbutter chapter 6 . 8/17/2019
Hello! Its me again. I can't believe this fiction is written two years ago, it feels so fresh in my eyes and I enjoy every part of this but my favorite part is of course the interaction between Neji and Tenten; it's just... flows, naturally. And also, I enjoy the interaction between Neji and Hanabi.

I think that's all for now. Thank you for sharing this with us! xoxo.
keroRiBBIT chapter 13 . 8/12/2019
Was this really written almost three years ago? Gawd. Still as sweet as the first time ive read it.
Senchiga chapter 8 . 7/5/2019
Oh God this is cute oml
sailormoonie17 chapter 7 . 4/19/2019
I particularly loved this chapter! It's so nice to see a vulnerable side to Neji, and Gamariki is hilarious.
sailormoonie17 chapter 3 . 4/19/2019
I've been looking back at all my favorite authors, trying to find something new to tide me over until the new chapter of YMBIS! I'm not sure why I haven't read this before, but it's just as well written as your other stuff!
Parsat chapter 13 . 12/19/2018
With Christmas rolling around the corner I had to bust this one out to celebrate the festivities. It’s one of my favorite holiday pieces, as well as my favorite modern AU for Naruto. What I like about it is, like any other Christmas yarn, is that the story is simple yet captivating. Without a super complicated plot, the way you incorporated the characters and your warm writing style really shine through. That’s not to say this piece was totally predictable! The crossover with Street Fighter was a welcome surprise. I also really liked the meta-commentary about Naruto being the center of their town.

Now I suppose some might say some of the portions about real estate and legal proceedings might have dragged a bit, but I enjoyed them. When I first read this almost a year ago, I had just experienced the loss of a family member, and what I read here felt very true to life. Even just the way the emotional aspects of that were portrayed hit close to home. That’s the part that takes this story for me to the next level, that added verisimilitude.

In short: Move on, A Christmas Carol! We’ve got a new classic coming to town.
transformation no jutsu chapter 13 . 9/14/2018
best fanfiction ever
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