Oh dear update soon please, thank you.

Oh no.. that can't be how it ends! D:

Oh

Toriel! You can't take the shopping cart back with you! Target will want that back! What were you thinking?

It's all right. You're new here, so I forgive you. Just take it back within a day or so, please.

This section of the chapter reminds me of a chapter I wrote for a My Little Pony story, which I called "The Wall Store"... in reference to Wal-Mart, of course.

I imagined myself explaining the snail situation on the surface, among others, to Toriel and the guards. I find it endearing how Flowey is gradually getting more accepted by everyone. They're starting to have reason to care about him, especially Toriel.

I also find your depiction of Frisk really compelling. And look, we just learned something else about them!

I want to know why they were hanging out with Jerry!

The conversation between Flowey and Alphys was somewhat interesting, but I was hoping Alphys would have some specific ideas to tell Flowey. She built him up a lot for just telling them that she'd try to help. It is neat to see his gradual accumulation of interest, though, as if he -does- care a little... or maybe his indifference is just tilting more toward sharing than withdrawal.

Interesting take on Flowey on the surface. Househunting. The real mystery of this story is what exactly Frisk is thinking. Silent Frisk is intriguing that way. I find it interesting as well that the humans in this setting are so blandly accepting. They aren't embracing monsters, but they don't hate or especially fear them either. I hope we get to see a little depth in at least one.

Best floweypot fic I've seen thus far.

Flowey fucked up, I'm guessing we're gonna go with the frisk got abused when she was a kid story or the frisk just don't like talking in general, overall great chapter. You know I saw there was a thread with a lot of flowey centered story's if you want you could try having your story posted there and get more followers, I mean seriously this story really deserves more followers.

This is adorable in so many ways! And flowey is exactly how I imagine her disturbed and uncaring!

I love this story. I feel sorry for Flowey/Asriel. But I'm glad Frisk got him out of the Underground and that Alphys has an idea on how to help him. Can't wait to see more :P