I need to see what happens next D:

Hey I was just wondering, are you planning on continuing this fic? I really like the premise flaws aside.

Please update this story! The idea and the plot if the story is a fascinating one. I really wish to see more of this story, with longer chapters though. Please, I hope you find the time to update this fantastic story of yours.

Thank you!

hmm...next.

dude, what a shitty ending.

This has been awesome. Hope you can get more of it out soon

Please update this story it's great. Can't to see what Jaune will do next.

well this is quite the story liking it so far. and word of encouragement some people have their heads to far up their own asses to see anything through another point of view if people keep hating you for a simple story line well thats them and their ignorance dont let it bother you, keep pushing and things will be far better afterwards. feel free to take this with a grain of salt after all I am only 19.

I really like the story as for advice for Jaune, he could do what I would do, what my dad would do, and hell even what my boss has admitted to doing it's got 3 easy steps.
1. decide if you need a tool and what kind. I prefer a bat it's simple, easy to get a hold of, and comes in different colors and models.
2. Choose whether or not to round up a posse. personally I'd prefer to do it myself gives it that personal touch.
3. Find the asshole and beat the living Fuck out of him to hell and back to get the message across that he is to stay the Fuck away from her, her kids, the dog, and anybody else that's deemed necessary and that if the piece of shit ever lays his hands on any woman ever in an inappropriate manner he might as well dig the hole and buy a stone

Have I already favorited this? Just gotta make sure...

yes. this is pleasing to me.

Good work! Enjoying every chapter :) Hope to see many more.

Romance & Humor
first conflict is domestic abuse

Dude, what.

That aside, I find myself quite liking this story. A few things are a bit too cheesy, like Glynda, but overall the premise is just so amusing and engaging at the same time.

I kinda wish it took place in the normal Remnant universe, though. Could you imagine how that would go about?

Pls update more this is my favorite story and it's really good

Jesus Christ the amount of hate this story got is amazing. I mean, it's just a fucking story, why the hell are these people got offended for? Butchering the character? There are loads of other fict that does the same and they got a free pass but not this?

You don't like cheating? Then don't fucking read it. I mean i don't like futa, but i don't go to these ficts and flame the author. You want to criticise him? Then do a constructive one. You people need to grow up goddamn.

Oh and nice job author, altough i would prefer a story in which tailong doesn't cheat and beat up his wife. It make the story cheap i guess?