Rooting for you! Looking foreword to seeing how the story evolves!

I never thought that I would be able to be irritated and at the same time despise Jack Frost for such foolishness he displayed in some chapters, especially this one. Perhaps it's just me, but still, my opinion still stands.

I think number 5 will be the best, it's a definite stress relief.

Interesting chapter and plot and idea

Are you almost finished writing your story?

Ahh must have more! More more more! *starts to trash media lab around her* MORE!

I think you should write more when you can as it is really good so for, yet sad as well, please and thank you, I think in the next chapter you should write that the others and guardians get there before a bad thing can happen to Emma at all.

Looooove this story please update soon!

Okay, we are getting straight into the serious stuff!
Not that that's bad. It's just a lot to take in for me. I like it though. The seemingly split personality thing. Sure hope there's more information on that backstory of Jokul. Both between him and Jack and him and Khione and especially between Khione and Jack. It all sounds like they're really interesting stories waiting to be told!

Oh god, that was so angsty and dark, just like you said... really good too! Can’t wait for an update!

Alright so like promised I'm giving you some feedback. I like the start. At first I was a little confused with where we were and what was going on, but as I continued reading things slowly became clear.
It's a good strong prologue in my opinion. One thing I was lost at was when Anemone said something about the first borns name as if she was just shut down for her suggestion of Jackson but I felt like I'd missed a part of their conversation here. Did they say anything about them expecting and possible names at some point? And how was their leaving when Emily got upset at the prophecy a reason for her to be upset like that? I'm asking because either something was left out of the chapter or I skipped over a couple of lines there.

God I HATE Khione! Such a disgusting perverted, ugly molester! I hope she does or burn in a fire! Current deserve to call jack , my prince :( ! Disgusting slut! Only the weak and cruel resort to raping or molesting! I hate people who do it but are delusional about their actions the most though :( ! Please say she does soon lol! Till next time, bye!

Poor Jack! :((

Question 1: How many chapters will there be?
Question 2: Is MiM going to intervene?
Question 3: Could you have Khione make a vague HoO mention? Like, complain about "that stupid Aphrodite child, always ruining my plans with Jason or something? Just in passing.

Wow... Poor Jack! This story is horribly good. I need to stop reading fictions that torture Jack... But I can't. This story is just feeding my bad habit! Now I am going to look at your other fictions to see if there is a prequel to this one!