Reviews for The Last Sparks
N2 chapter 3 . 10/18/2019
Please continue this story.
Nick terakidan chapter 3 . 9/11/2017
Heroic Spirits in their true. Fullest form are pretty much OP incarnated. Servants however. Are ants compared to their full Heroic Spirits counterpart. The class "shells" severally limits them and their Noble Phantasms
0 Jordinio 0 chapter 3 . 8/2/2017
It all comes down to what Naruto you're using. If he's in his actual body, then there isn't any servant that's going to come close to his physical ability, even 12 year old Naruto would be ranked up about A-rank in speed and strength.

The servant system limits some servants like Heracles, while at the same time empowering others like Jack the Ripper who was a normal human. The class they are stuffed into, is actually much weaker than their actual selves. Each Heroic Spirit is in fact raised to godlike levels, granted the gods in Nasu aren't the be all and end all, but still.

Servants are weaker than their Heroic Spirit selves.

Regardless, against Naruto if he was in his actual body, very few things could kill him as far as Grail Wars are concerned. He's tanked attacks that can split the moon with ease, had his own power turned back on him in a gargantuan explosion and then falling from space...and taking little to no injuries at all. Then there's the fact of his regenerative powers, which knits together freaking stab wounds in his lungs/heart when he was 12, so no telling how powerful it got later.

Only the likes of Ea and other weapons near that level would be able to kill Naruto in his own body. Hell, Excalibur wouldn't be able to kill him, he'd tank that with no problem. It would need to be a Noble Phantasm with a conceptual effect that can negate his insane durability and regenerative powers.

And that isn't even the biggest problem when dealing with Naruto. Take away his Rasengan, Bijuu powers, his universal mastery and understanding over chakra...and he still has the Truth Seeking Orbs. Or Goudama for quickness.

The Goudama cannot be broken or overpowered except through the user of the Sage Arts/Nature Arts. Only the energy of nature can fight them. And with just one of them, Naruto can form the Sword of Nunoboko, which in itself is pretty much Ea. It and Ea would either tear everything apart or cancel each other out, that's just how powerful it is. It's Anti-World as well, with pretty much the same effect as Ea, with a few choice differences.

If you don't want a curb stomp in Naruto's favor every single time with everyone having to resort to their NP's immediately, then the best bet is Naruto being a servant himself. Even without people knowing about him, he'd be a pretty fucking strong servant regardless, top tier with ease. just like Gilgamesh - but it would atleast balance things out more for those against Naruto.

I mean, Naruto can use Yin-Yang Release. Which is more or less the Denial of Nothingness. So on top of all his powers, he has a true magic as well. And is pretty much limitless on power.

I'd be pretty disappointed if Naruto was in his own body and servants actually matched him to be honest. Servants are weaker than their true selves after all as I've said. So it would basically be saying, godlike Naruto struggles with their weakened selves.
ARSLOTHES chapter 3 . 7/27/2017
Looking forward to the next chapter
shadow chapter 3 . 7/21/2017
I liked the chapter!
Mythic Imagination chapter 3 . 4/13/2017
Enjoy the story so far. Hope you plan to continue it.
Raremist98 chapter 3 . 3/11/2017
If you do a pairing you should do Naruto and Arturia seeing they have the same dream for peace and he can help repair the relationship between her and Mordred. Keep up the good work
miguelgiuliano.co chapter 3 . 2/9/2017
Genial historia espero con ansias por el próximo capitulo .
Si vas agregar personajes de naruto, bleach, one-piece espero que los pongas como dios es al igual que naruto así te ahorrarían problemas con los argumentos .
Rio Skyron chapter 3 . 1/29/2017
I have a couple of things to say

First of all, NOTHING and I repeat NOTHING is stronger then the Yata mirror. It had been stated in universe that it is invincible. It repels EVERYTHING.

Second of all, and this is a part of the review I'm writing is done at the request of the person who recommended this fic to me. I need to remind you that the shonen holy trinity characters even the ones from bleach outclass many fate/stay servants. Fourth War Naruto was able to deliver more destructive power than a thousand Excaliburs with a regular rasengan during his final fight with Sasuke. Heck if they hadn't taken their battle to space they would have caused the apocalypse. The only characters that could warrant Asura mode and/or Tailed Beast Mode, Fate King Solomon, the being who controls Fate King Solomon, and Kayama. Any other would just need Sage Mode.
AznPuffyHair chapter 3 . 1/28/2017
Well, i'll give my own personal interpretation of the type-moon power level in a PM after this. This is for reveal!

That said, good job. I like this much better than the original version. It clearly shows Naruto's role as a mentor and trainer, giving tips in situations while making sure (for now) that things don't go off the deep end. I only hope that he doesn't solo the dragon in France... He definitely could even if he is restricted to Fourth War level.

I never played the game (despite very much wanting to), so i don't exactly know the exact story line, so i don't know what was changed and what didn't. I do however like it if you don't follow the original too closely, and would diverge sometime in the future. A god's presence tends to disrupt things after all.

So keep up the good work. I look forward to see if Naruto will remain a mentor, or if he'll somehow take on a fatherly role too.

See you next time!
Tera12 chapter 3 . 1/26/2017
Great chapter :-) :-) Cant wait for more
piddle chapter 3 . 1/19/2017
good chapter
Guest chapter 3 . 1/19/2017
If you are interested in the statistics of characters from different works of fiction you should have a look at VS Battles Wiki. Their info isn't 100% percent accurate but it's at least good for getting a generalization of a characters powers and where they stack up against other series' characters.
Guest chapter 3 . 1/16/2017
To be absolutely honest, the real danger of Servants is that they tend to be inhumanly skilled and some of their abilities are ridiculously unfair even when you compare them to Heavy-Hitters of other anime (like Galvinism which is a skill that literally converts mana from energy based magic attacks into energy for the servant to heal and sustain themselves). The real advantage they have though is the idea that everybody has a natural enemy, a person who is suited to fighting or defeating them (like Gilgamesh and EMIYA, or Iskander and his Mother), servants essentially fight using certain concepts, like Karna's God-Killing spear or Robin Hood's Yew Bow that cause Poison in the body to explode.

In other words, just take into account who's facing who, and you can make a convincing case, also one inportant fact is that Mana usually needs to be involved in some way to harm Servants which is why a normal Human Being can't beat them. This includes the Servants and anything they touch as they are spiritual themselves.
CaedmonCousland chapter 3 . 1/18/2017
Ugh, power levels. That is a difficult thing to quantify. As you already pointed out, things get twisted around. I'll do my best to contribute though.

Do you mean how powerful are the heroes before becoming a servant or after? This matters in a lot of cases. Like Jack the Ripper. There is no evidence that she ever knew magecraft, and her story itself concludes she never had someone to rely on and teach her. So that means she would theoretically have only the physical capabilities of a, what is she? Ten years old? So while she isn't suited to frontline combat, her still beyond human physical capabilities have to be a result of her being a servant instead of her real life capabilities? On the other end of the spectrum there are people like Cu Chulainn or Heracles. Cu Chulainn varies greatly between the Lancer and Caster classes, and I think I read a quote by the authors that Heracles would be just as dangerous as an Archer. These people seem restricted immensely by the class system. Then there are people like Artoria who seem to become tall and busty as a Lancer.

Moving on, the actual physical capabilities of servants. This is what annoys me. Now the lowest Parameter is 'E', which is supposedly ten times normal human ability. With each letter better being another X10. So Artoria, who is ranked B in Strength, theoretically has forty times stronger than a normal person...which is absurd. During Fate/Zero, Kiritsugu couldn't even use Tim Alter-Triple Accel without Avalon to heal him as his body couldn't stand it. In comparison a 'basic' spell like Reinforcement somehow allows Rin to defeat Caster in physical combat with a single blow. However with even a D Endurance ranking, Caster was twenty times more durable than a normal human. Not to mention her magic. So apparently a professional mercenary like Kiritsugu using a complicated magecraft like time manipulation was several times worse than a teenager using a basic spell. Even a professional assassin like Caster's master, forgot his name, when enhanced by Caster's far superior magic was only capable of being trouble for Saber for a few seconds. Hell, how did Shirou survive. Theoretically people like EMIYA, Gilgamesh, and Heracles could have broken him in half with a flick of their fingers, and speed walked circles around him. I know it's all plot armor, but it shows how bull their rankings are and enhancement style magecraft. I personally think an E ranking being normal human, D being 2X, C being 3X, would make more sense. Still, nothing is really consistent. So we really have no idea idea how to compare servants to normal people.

As for comparion to Naruto. Quick question. In what form is Naruto. Is he basically a servant, in essence occupying a vessel, a god, just temporarily taking human form, or did he literally return to his previous form?

Regardless, I think Naruto should be faster and stronger than most servants. However I think you can use noble phantasms to limit him. If Naruto came down as a servant and thus has noble phantasms of his own, they would almost certainly be Kyuubi, the Bijuu, or Sic Paths Sage Mode/Bijuudama. All three would probably be too powerful for the singularitis, limiting Naruto to his regular capabilities and techniques.

I think it is in regard to Noble Phantasms that servants are most powerful. While some are weapons that actually existed, like Excalibur, others are simply their legends forming some sort of conceptual weapon. Like Jack the Ripper. That's simply her her myth as a serial killer being refined into a weapon. Oda Nobunaga has a ridiculous one in her ability to seemingly growing stronger when her opponents possess divinity or mystery. I think its entirely possible she could defeat Gilgamesh, Heracles, Karna, and Achilles with that skill and her noble phantasms, arguably four of the most powerful servants. Then others like Gilgamesh's Ea, which is basically a crystallization of the 'genesis' of the Earth before life and thus likely able to destroy anything in a localized area, or Karna's Brahmastra Kundala, which is likened to a nuclear weapon, or Vasavi Shakti, a spear of lightning able to take gods down.

The point is that many noble phantasms are so powerful that fights between servants seem to be either 'A battle of who manages to use theirs first' or 'a battle of who has the stronger noble phantasm'. So if Naruto wasn't able to use his, that would be a very easy way to even the field between him and other servants. Cause no one wants to watch Naruto bulldoze everyone. No matter the form he's taking, many noble phantasms could no doubt hurt or even kill Naruto.

Although some servants could probably just compete. Gilgamesh really is meant to be an almost unfairly powerful hero. Karna and Achilles too. Personally I consider Scathach the most terrifying servant of all. Despite being a pure human, she possessed so much talent that she killed gods to the point she wasn't considered human anymore and her home literally split off from the world. She's also a god slayer. She exemplifies the concept that pure skill can overcome anything if at a sufficient level.

Huh. Just trying to reason through Fate's power system is making my head hurt. I keep coming up with more points, and I feel like it's forming a mess. I'm done. I hope I at least helped a tiny bit. Good luck with your next update.
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