Reviews for My Hidden Child |
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![]() ![]() ![]() How is farah so smart when I was her age I was eating mud lol xD |
![]() ![]() Don’t worry I hate terra bbrae 4 life ƪ()ʃ |
![]() ![]() this was an interesting story overall! good work :) i just wish raven apologized to terra for sleeping with beast boy. terra really had to be the bigger person here while raven and beast boy didnt |
![]() ![]() Ok. You're great. Beautiful story... just, I spent two night without sleeping cause i this. And I'm rry for James. And... why Jinx should ever be such a terrible person?... but I understand that was for the story. You're a great writer! |
![]() ![]() *continuation* Beast boy overall was portrayed as very immature and occ because in the actually show he was head over head heels for raven. I also feel like there was too much jealousy on ravens part u barely got to see beast boy jealous. It was just to many things wrong with this story for me. Beast boy was just to scummy for me I honestly hated his character. And it was too many sex scenes portrayed between beast boy and terra like I still don’t understand why u would insert that shit in there and in the end they would still be together. Fuck this story Tho this is just a personal opinion I just didn’t like the personalities of the two main characters ️ so it’s a no from me |
![]() ![]() Ok... so I’m definitely stopping here and I have have a few things to say about this story. Spoiler alert First offs I downright really disliked this story I’m surprised I even got to chapter 19. The first thing I didn’t like about this story is tht beast boy and raven fucked when he was still in a relationship with his girlfriend. The second thing is honestly at this point in the story I no longer wanted beast boy and raven to be together. Beast boy constantly chose his girlfriend over raven and then raven jus had the mentality tht she would wait for him or sum shit maybe it’s just me but I find people like tht very idiotic. And beast boy was very unfaithful to terra so it’s very likely he would do the same thing to raven |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am in love. I can’t stop reading this. One note: Beast Boy had red hair and green eyes before his transformation- when he was still Garfield. I’m a big nerd. I’m sorry. It didn’t ruin my enjoyment of this at all. I’m in awe at this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AHWWW. This was such a cute story! I loved it so much. Here it's 2.00 am but I couldn't resist! I loved every part of it. Great work. |
![]() ![]() THIS WAS THE MOST AMAZING FANFIC IV EVER READ i have scrolled past this story dozens of times and after reading just about everything i might possibly like i decided to give this one a chance and im so glad i did, i loved it so much your charectors are so on point and logical and amazing best fanfic here, thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love sequels! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i wish Farah would call Cyborg Uncle Cy |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was great and i think the sequel should be farah growing up and making many amazing memories along the way but plz no cliches |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really cute. I enjoyed it |
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![]() ![]() Terra's pregnant isn't she. |