Aw, poor Stan and Bill. I can't help but feel for both of them, one that was supposed to have protected his loved ones from a demon, and a demon that fell from power and is trapped living with those he's hurt. I hope things get better for the both of them.

Overall, I don't know how to feel about this fic. For the majority of the story, I feel sad for Stan and Bill, but god almighty, that opening and drunk Bill scene was downright hilarious! I wish my stories opened with that kind of humor. And drunk Bill... I laughed so hard at that.

Great job with the stories, and I hope that there is more to come! You write these so well, and I can't get enough! :)

This is really fun, I'm totally gonna keep my eyes peeling for more of these one-shots! :)