Reviews for A Simple Relationship
Mangareader13 chapter 6 . 7/2
If only Lucifer could see Issei's future love live. The man would need to do even less.
Yeah most people are going to see the IT as their Personas themselves. Thank goodness we aren't including the P3 gang because instead of Izanagi we get Thanatos, Orpheus and Messiah.

It's amazing how different in tone DxD turns into simply because of an extra dose of seriousness/realism.

Yu's lies are going to bite him. Though the IT would totally be considered a peerage harem because who doesn't have a crush on Yu?
Mangareader13 chapter 2 . 7/2
Fate loves to use small mistakes for the big surprises doesn't it.

Rias doesn't know the Detective Prince nor Risette huh? Considering her situation that makes sense.

Don't mess with Yu. That revenge was brutal.

Time for revealations and scare-mongering

Have fun relaying the challenge to your peerage Rias.
Mangareader13 chapter 1 . 7/2
Ah the rumour mill, if the Perverted Trio knew of Yu's they would be even more jealous of him then they are of Kiba.

Good reasoning for why they clicked so quickly. Rias isn't that different from his friends in Inaba.

Poor Yu, home is where the heart is after all and holy does Golden Week and the Golden Ending show how natural being in Inaba feels to him.
Malerror chapter 7 . 6/17
I know it's almost been a year since your last update, but I've been playing the steam release of Persona 4 Golden and it's been making go back and reread all of the fanfiction I've loved in the past. I loved the misunderstandings that happened during the course of the story and I would like to see how this story would continue to develop.
daggercloak000 chapter 7 . 5/17
When you update... Please update soon
Fullmetal11791 chapter 7 . 5/15
Well for what it's worth i enjoyed these seven chapters. Too bad you stopped writing it.
Fullmetal11791 chapter 6 . 5/15
Well, the fic seems dead so i doubt the "spoiler" at the bottom here is much of a spoiler, but i do think you do a good job depicting Sirzechs here. Definitely something I'd buy into.

That said, doesn't Issei think that Yu is dating Rias? Why is he explaining the Riser situation as if it's something Yu is not aware of. That should be pretty suspicious. Furthermore, if he thinks Yu is dating Rias, and that they've been sleeping together, why is he after Rias' virginity still? Feels like previous info is conflicting with this.
Fullmetal11791 chapter 5 . 5/15
I think this is the first time I've ever seen someone take light poisoning seriously in a dxd fic. Thank you.

Also, there were some great one liners here, it was quite an amusing chapter.

Lastly, very cool depiction of Freed.
Fullmetal11791 chapter 1 . 5/15
I'm really not a fan of Rias in general, but this is very cute
Yojiba chapter 7 . 1/20
I have to say that this fic has the best rias ever. Everything is good don't worry I hope you keep this fic going.
Woyogoyo chapter 2 . 1/16
Kind of odd that you chose to use watashi at the end there. While it's technically gender neutral, it's usually perceived as feminine. The more common forms of I for males are Ore and Boku.
the-lost-memories6 chapter 7 . 1/14
Is this gonna continue
Becuase its a good story
MoeMoeMoe chapter 7 . 11/3/2019
I've recently discovered this story, I think it is great! Especially with the character of Sirzechs here. You manage to make him more serious and deep with his role as the Lucifer. Personally, I like to know more what will happened with Yu and him because of clashing of ideals and wills. Please update more.
Pedro52 chapter 5 . 8/12/2019
awesome
Lix231 chapter 7 . 8/8/2019
I realy love this Story. My Favrite Scene was when they met Nanako. Oh god it was greate. Poor Issey. Also i can understand why poeple dont like Rias. She is FAR from my Favrite Karakter. For one manye relised she let Issey die! Yes she was desperate but that dosnt change the fact that she led an innocent Boy die so she can pretty much enslave him. Also her Personalaty is not for awryone. Her Pride is more annoying than awrithing but is more because i HATE Pridfull Karakters. She has her good quallities sure but for me the Bad just outweight the good. The same with Akeno i realy dislike her. For one i despise Sadists. And Two she could have defeated Yubeluna and probably Riser if she would get over her stupid hatred and youse her Fallen Angel Side. But no she rather wants her best Friend becoming a Sex Slave and with that probably also Asia, Koneko and she herself than youse Holy Lightning. I can understand that Koneko didnt want to youse Senjutsu after all she taught it would drive her insane but Akeno simpley has no excuse.
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