omg pls pls pls pls pls continue! this is amazing!

Fleur forgot one, unless the Obliviation is completely overpowered as a punishment. Lockhart-with-Ronald's-wand-like overpowered. Incantation is "Explosivo Castrado". It's non-canon, though, I think Rorschach's Blot invented it. But it sure would fit here.

This is really good! Please continue!

Grindelwald appropriating the symbol of the Hallows is frankly very believable. He and Albus had long sought out the Hallows before they came to irreconcilable differences on how to carry the Wizarding World to future glory.

It's even an inherited trait in the Dark Lord who followed as Voldemort sought to take the symbols and power of the Founders of Hogwarts by sticking his Horcruxes into them.

The concept of the challenge is good, but you could have expanded that story so so much more . Like, making them see more than just one scene especially with harry, therer was so mucb potential for more. Sad you didnt go for it

There was so much more with this that could have been done with this fic. showing the chamber would have removed a bunch of future death eaters and current ones who wouldn't want to serve a half blood. Showing the Sirius black incident would have showed him innocent and fudge a idiot getting a competent minister in office for if voles in his shorts came back.

I like the concept of everyone seeing why the names were picked.

This was cool but I think you should show them more lol

Loved it! I hope you will write sometime a sequel to this fic. I would like to see more of it later.
You can write really well.

Berend van den Akker

Awwww I wanted to see everyone's reaction to Harry killing a 1000 year old Basilisk.

xxx KUDOS xxx : )

I think he lied to Quirrel, but Voldie saw through the lie :P

The purebloods would hate someone who fights with their body instead of a wand.

That was a very bad joke and I doubt any student would have gotten it anyway. They are rather savage, after all. Like cavemen.

Yes, I agree, Harry is over-qualified to be in the Tournament. To the point that he would probably have been banned from competing if his competence had been known simply to make things fair for the other champions. And Aurors would beg him for lessons in badassery.

Your chapters are waaaaay too short. Each isn't even short enough to be a fragment of an actual chapter and they are so short that there is not enough detail and you cram things in so much it comes off as childish because you just don't have room to word things like a "grown-up".